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Hey, this is a good story. Update soon?

awww it was getting good too!! *pouts* maybe you'll update someday..

when will you update this great fanfic?????!!!!

Oh my Holy Kami-sama. If you don't update I'm going to die. This is one of the most 'zomg' fanfics I've come across in Forever. And the best part is, is that you already mentioned ppl like Anko, Asuma, Kurenai, Shino, and even Shibi. I feel that these characters are always neglected in male/male fanfics. One of my favorite fighting scenes was that one btwn Shino and Zetsu. Speaking of Zetsu...what the hell happened to him and Kisame? They just like....disappeared O.o Or is it supposed to be a trap? Like I bet that they injected Naruto with something and they were hiding in the trees, probably making sure that Shibi and his son found them? My curiosity sky-rocketted to the point that I'm now bubbling with excitement. Don't hold out on me or I'm going to summon Sesshoumaru to your house so he could bring you here. Then I'll be glad to tie you up and feed you cookies so you could tell me the story non-stop. I'll allow you restroom breaks occasionally and your daily dose of Naruto.


Now if you'll please excuse me, I have to go to work in about ten minutes and I don't want to give my boss another excuse for his God-for-saken 2 hour lectures.


Keep up the amazing work, and oh, I disagree with one of your commenters saying that you are gradually moving away from the plot. I mean, how COULD you be moving away? Naruto and Sasuke just made it to Konoha. People need to have some patience I tell ya *wink* *wink*


----Pockygirl101-----

Next! ... Next! ... WHERES the damn NEXT CHAPTER button!!!! ARgghhh!! It wasn't enough! NOoooo.... I thought the Sasuke touching Naruto in his sleep thing was cute... except for the fact that it was hurting Naruto a little... yes... that part was sad. I'm sure other wise Naruto would have very much been delighted by the touch, mhmmm. XD
As you maybe have already guessed... I can't wait for the next chapter!!! If you could, e-mail me when you update again?
School has also started for me, and my comp... it was messed up for a little so couldn't check your story out right away. But it was very nice to find out first thing that you had updated! Yes, I was very excited! Another thing was the fanfiction.net one bout another review! hehehe, oh man am I bad, I really need to update :( need more time in the day.

Hope school isn't too harsh on you and you're able to update soon! I don't know what entricacies you have planned but this story is sooooo very intriging and no doubt it'll be in my mind for a week. If not more. Great chaap by the way. ANd good discriptions of the action. I'm not so good with that sort of thing. ~_^

Inus_Kagome_Forever

P.s. Yes... it is long I guess... but, I'm just not ready to change it yet (Note: has had this penname since she first got her account on AFF.net, lol) It's not like I can do Sasuke's Naruto Forever (that would be longer, plus I'm not a guy... I could just be like some random ordinary name like hmmm... MangaGirl... or Cookie :D i like cookies!

Omg, so kawaii. Like, zomg. I can't believe me miss so much from your story. School is tough. Just wanted you to know that. I'm up right now doing this stupid math so I thought that I needed a well deserved breaker b/c damn, I have class in 8 hours and I'm still awake. So I browse through this God of a sight and find your story. Me loving every bit. Specially the cuddliness. Ignore my poor choice of fangirlism words. I'm so tired and my fingers are wanting to sleep on me. Btw, my homework is on-line. T.T So I can't even relax in my comfy bed while I go through this torture. Dammit, I gotta pee. Hey, Mickey T. says Hi and so do a lot of other ppl that I have never seen before in my life (How the hell do you know more ppl at my own school than I do? O.o) k k, since I've got Political Science, math, AND Engineering tomorrow.........errr, today, I'll let you go.


Update on that next chapter quick. I need to read something that has plot in it dammit. All these one-shot plotless smut is going to break my poor brain. I need my brain for school T^T

Love you my lil Naru-chan -^^- #HUGGLES#
~KTayS~

omg! omg! omg!! -goes in dramatic pose- nooooo!!! not naruto!!! -stands back up and clears throat- good story. can't wait to see what happens next. -good guy pose-

oh noes!! Naruto!! >.Awesome chapter!! Cant wait for more!!!

Yay, a new chapter’s up! Anyway, you did wonderful work on this particular chapter. All the character's felt completely in character, even Sasuke's selfishness at wanting to keep Naruto all to himself. ;)

I'm hoping to see some more Naru/Sasu development soon in the next chapter, it was kinda lacking in this one since most of it was centered on the action scenes. Besides that, everything else was great. The action scenes were done expectionally well. Poor Risa...she gonna be traumatized of fish-people (a.k.a. Kisame) for life!!! ^_^

Update soon I hope!

Kyaaa~~ Finally got around to reading it. I'm SO sorry it took me so long to review *sobs with guilt* I have exams soon and aff is blocked at school XP. But still that's no excuse! I promise it won't happen again =D.

On to the review! That chapter was fabulous. Kami-sama, the scene with Sasuke sleeping next Naruto was hontou kawaii naa *shivers*. Sasuke is so dreamy~~ Damn it, it's another cliffhanger, but they always make fics so much better, don't they? Thank you again for emailing me *weeps* you're so sweet. *huggles* And also: ARIGATOU FOR UPDATING! ^^