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Wah!! That was so good! I loved how you switched between Sasuke's POV and third person, it was an interesting way to write the scene and I think it worked well, great job!

^^ I'm glad my reviews aren't too boring or ordinary- I try to write more than just: Great job! Update soon!

But I will say it now just because it's true! Awesome job on this chapter! Update again, okay?

oh please don't make sasukebe blind for too long! i feel so sorry for him :). mmm can't wait for the next chapter :*

I'm soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo sorry for not reviewing your story. I've been very busy with school and I couldn't find it at first. I apologize. You're wrong. This story really is good. And I don't think that you're moving away from the plot. It's true that it's very hard to talk about your characters when they're knocked out continuously. Sasuke sure does love to cuddle. Can't wait to see what Jiraiya puts in his story about them two. I've been wondering? Who exactly is going to be the stalker? Hmmmm? Can't wait,

Later RW, gotta catch my Z's Y.Y




Haily

Thank you so much for this wonderful piece. I at first believed that you were going to take longer but was surprised when the update was only about a month away. Thanks for emailing me, and thanx for the advice. I'll have to type a challenge/request out for my favorite couple. You said that you'll write one too, right? can't wait. And don't worry, you can write it after you're done with this story. So~ I see Sasuke loves to molest Naruto is his sleep *drool*

You've done it. I'm officially a NaruSasu fangirl. I was hoping for some lovey action, but I understand that you were trying to gather the flow of the story. Update soon, k? And don't worry if the chappies are short. Maybe that'll mean quicker updates?



Your new NaruSasu fan,
XxX~Sakura Uchiha~XxX

I don't know where this is going. So /much/ is happening, and the people involved are missing a lot of it themselves. I'm rivetted.

Don't be so hard on yourself. I liked this chapter, it fit nicely with the story and progressed it in a satisfactory way, and was also nicely detailed. Simply by allowing readers to visualize rather than over explaining adds the feeling you believe was lacking. Relax. Stop being so self-judgemental and appreciate your work for the quality stuff that is is.

^^

Much love from your teme

Ruby Lips

Not certain what to say about this. Nor am I intending to 'flame'. To the point, as I continue reading this, this story is driving further and further away from plot and focussing on way too huge a cast of characters. Specifically those of your own creation. You might want to consider cutting the load, because it's just exceedingly overwhelming. And even as the story claims to be a yaoi-ish NaruSasuNaru, it appears to have little or nothing to do with them. I will end off here. Good luck with your future writings.

You really made me hope there for a moment that you had added another chapter ::sniff:: Please update soon!

Inus_Kagome_Forever

Wonderful fic! Both chapter's were done extremely well. It had nice imagery, diolouge, and the characteraztion was incredible. All in all, a great fic. Did Saki die? It sure looked that way, but...perhaps you'll keep her around. I hope she's not dead, I was actually starting to like her and usually I detest OC's. *frowns*

Anyway, update soon I hope!

P.S. More NaruSasu moments, please! ^_^

Hey, sorry it took me so long to comment, but I just got back from vacatation, and haven't had a chance to read the newest chapter. I still love this story, and cannot wait to see what's going to happen. I don't know if you're a new fanfiction writer, but as someone that writes fiction too(I'm on LPfiction and fanfiction.net)just take your time, always proofread, and do your best to put out your best work.

Anyway, please email me when you get the next chapter out!