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July 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ok i'm going to be bad right now, i was read some of the reviews for broken and saw yours and good kakairu(kakashi & Iruka) fic is Side Effects its on fanfiction.net not here, but its my favoret kakairu and there are tuns of them that you can find if you look it up google, ( and i should know because I just looove the kakashi and iruka pair)!!! oh and i really liked your fic good work^_^!!!!!
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June 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm confused but hopefully everything will be okay XD. Can you e-mail me if you update... this story is very interesting
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June 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
nice i lke
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June 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ok... so you had me absolutely riveted. Althouth some of the paragraphs were rather long, I didn't mind since I was glued to the screen for the story. I hope you are able to update soon.
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June 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Such suspense. Well written. I really like it and want to know what happened. Too bad this site does not have the alert feature. I will check back.
The chapter is too short. You should make the future chapters longer, unless you undate really quick. ^ ^
The chapter is too short. You should make the future chapters longer, unless you undate really quick. ^ ^
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May 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was really interesting. I would love to read more, so please update! And good job for your first real fanfic, everyone was really in character. There were a couple of grammar mistakes, but nothing major. I can't wait for your next update! If it's not too much trouble, would you mind emailing me when you update? Thanks!
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May 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ZOMG
its been ages since i've read a good, goood SasuNaru, let alone any kind of fanfic....
I worship you... you are godly and Pwn-like in so many ways....
Please keep it up i am absolutely intrigued!
its been ages since i've read a good, goood SasuNaru, let alone any kind of fanfic....
I worship you... you are godly and Pwn-like in so many ways....
Please keep it up i am absolutely intrigued!
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May 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
umm ok, i read the somewhat perplexingly puzzling hater's flame.
is it me, or did this person swim through nearly 2000 yaoi SasuNaru/NarutoYaoi fictions to tell you, and your fic sucks because theyre not gay, etc, (btw- even my non-yaoi friends are saying that naruto is so very... yaoi- it aint no coincidence i say)....???
*blink blink*- really.... i mean all the other fics are sasunaru or yaoi.... eeeeeeehh... .HAHAHAHAHAHA omg wat a turd... eheheh o my gawd that is actually funny...
and if that dude carries an UZI, well pned bitch cuz youll have to face the army of armed HAGS with RPG's MPG's and yes, billions of tons of mortars and our trusty kalashnikovs.... yeah bitch i know my ammo... i (and all the other fans) pwn joo, hahaha
keep ur story up... this is awesome... we shall fwap haters as we read.
is it me, or did this person swim through nearly 2000 yaoi SasuNaru/NarutoYaoi fictions to tell you, and your fic sucks because theyre not gay, etc, (btw- even my non-yaoi friends are saying that naruto is so very... yaoi- it aint no coincidence i say)....???
*blink blink*- really.... i mean all the other fics are sasunaru or yaoi.... eeeeeeehh... .HAHAHAHAHAHA omg wat a turd... eheheh o my gawd that is actually funny...
and if that dude carries an UZI, well pned bitch cuz youll have to face the army of armed HAGS with RPG's MPG's and yes, billions of tons of mortars and our trusty kalashnikovs.... yeah bitch i know my ammo... i (and all the other fans) pwn joo, hahaha
keep ur story up... this is awesome... we shall fwap haters as we read.
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May 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Excellent start!
*pant* *drool* *whimper*
I am, very much, looking forward to your updates!
The only thing that may become a little tedious within the flow of the story, is the very skewed time sense. It may distort the mood that you are trying to create. Other than that, keep up the GREAT work!
Now my blessing for writers: May your life be easy, so that you may have ALL the time in the world to write and update!
~___^
*pant* *drool* *whimper*
I am, very much, looking forward to your updates!
The only thing that may become a little tedious within the flow of the story, is the very skewed time sense. It may distort the mood that you are trying to create. Other than that, keep up the GREAT work!
Now my blessing for writers: May your life be easy, so that you may have ALL the time in the world to write and update!
~___^
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May 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
For the 'I HATE YOU' retard: if you wanna talk shit next time to and about 99.9% of Naruto fans, atleast leave your pathetic name and email address.
On with the Review. I love the suspense. I cannot wait for the next chapter. Unlike most of the people here, your fanfic doesn't sound like it's going to be straightforward or Cliché. And it hella doesn't sound like a story that we'll be able to theorize and predict the outcome of either. for one, what happened to Naruto? What's up with Neji and Sakura's mission (I wonder if they got any action *little perv in the back of my mind has been pestering me into say that ^//^*)? What happened to Sasuke? Who the hell is Beniko (She sounds more important than any of the other peeps mentioned on the targeting list), who was the person that was following Sakura, why does Kiba sound confused about the scents in the forest, since when did Shika become ANBU (Btw, love the touch. As soon as he said 'Troublesome', I knew it was him. Glad you put him in so early in the story), and seeing as how it was four days later, I wonder where the hell Sasuke and Naruto are.
LASTLY, the most IMPORTANT question in the world, when will you update? ^^
Victoria Leblanc
On with the Review. I love the suspense. I cannot wait for the next chapter. Unlike most of the people here, your fanfic doesn't sound like it's going to be straightforward or Cliché. And it hella doesn't sound like a story that we'll be able to theorize and predict the outcome of either. for one, what happened to Naruto? What's up with Neji and Sakura's mission (I wonder if they got any action *little perv in the back of my mind has been pestering me into say that ^//^*)? What happened to Sasuke? Who the hell is Beniko (She sounds more important than any of the other peeps mentioned on the targeting list), who was the person that was following Sakura, why does Kiba sound confused about the scents in the forest, since when did Shika become ANBU (Btw, love the touch. As soon as he said 'Troublesome', I knew it was him. Glad you put him in so early in the story), and seeing as how it was four days later, I wonder where the hell Sasuke and Naruto are.
LASTLY, the most IMPORTANT question in the world, when will you update? ^^
Victoria Leblanc