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I looove this story, It doesn't confuse me at all. I love the ideas you have and I can't wait until you send me more of your work for me to go over :) I really hooked on it :P

Michelle

oooh wow so far you have got me soo hooked on this fic and its only the first chapter, it was totally intense and a bit confussing and only because of the little twists and no answers to all those questions, who is this black long haired ninja girl who broke out in a sob???? was it Sakura with dyed hair??? or someone else?? Hinata? but I so cant see her with long hair, and ten ten is already there, sigh omg you just have to update soon, I know I know I must be patiente, cant wait for a new chapter though, thank you for the totally excellent read, much huggles and smiles Mija...:-)

Um...Im a little confused
I think it was at the beginning that it seemed like Naruto was with Sakura... Was that past, present, hemm???
What I got so far apart for whatever ^^^^that is, is that Naruto and Sasuke are missing and Naruto (and maybe now even Sasuke)
is injured and Sakura and Neji are on there mission...am I close??
Well good job anyway, I like it ^_^

Ewwwwww that's so gross. What inspired you to write this? I'm just kidding ^^ I love Sasuke and Sakura as a couple, but I couldn't pass up and see how you'd react to this comment. B/c basically, that's exactly how that hater commented you. They didn't read the story for Christ sakes. This is the first M/M fanfic that I just started reading last night. I hope you continue on with it. I haven't even read anything remotely gross, so I don't know where that person get's off trying to call you a whore. And honestly, this is in Adulfanfiction. And plus, it's under the category Male/Male. so yeah. I just found it a bit strange. Anyways, they just said crap to nearly 95% of Naruto fans. I know, crazy to admit, but there are more people that like them two guys together than any other. That's what inspired me to come here and check out the stories. I mean, it's not like they're real people. They're anime characters. I think that crazy person has been doing some crack. Why else would they be so offended by it. I wouldn't have bothered to leave you a comment if I didn't read the story and found it good. And it really is. I got confused from where Sasuke found Naruto. I can tell he was beat up. But when he passed out into his unconcious state, did Sasuke get attacked as well? Was that blood that Naruto felt on his face? It couldn't have been tears, right? Can't wait for the next chapter. Oh yeah, ignore that freako. They weren't even brave enough to leave their email address. What kind of stupid crackhead does that? -.- empty threats. oh, do people make request here? Like, you know how there are challenges? Well, can readers make requests? I was wondering if you'd write a Sasuke and Sakura fanfic? I hope it's not too much trouble. You can make it a one-shot if you'd like. It's just that I'm making a survey and well, okay ummmm, I feel nervous asking actually. Do you think you can email me please?



XxX~Sakura Uchiha~XxX

Hey kid. Damn, it took me a while before I realized that you supposed to click that review button to leave a comment. couldn't it just have said 'comment'? Don't confuse people too much with the way you're writing. Or do you forget that people like me take a while to read in between metaphors? I like it tho. it's cool. U'r not killing Naruto tho. I know you too well. Second thought, maybe I don't. Intrigue me Shorty, (cause I know you hate me calling you that). Hurry with the next chapter. Ill stop teasing.

omg. Don't stop there. What happened to the guys? Is Naruto and Sasuke alright? Who is that Beniko person that they've been after, or whatever. I don't find this chapter short at all. But it does feel like a prologue. Isn't it? I mean, everything is happening in a rush. No not like that. I mean, everything is like happened and happening at the same time. Ummm, does that make sense? Whatever, update please.


Haily

Yo Ria, long time no talk. you've confused the crud outta me after reading your first chapter. what in Naruto world is going on in your brain? Yo holla, good luck with it. I'll tell Matt about it when I leave to school (class doesn't start for me till 2)

Ja,

*K-Tay*

Nice story so far, it's very good. I like your plot and your summary was really well done.

I wonder what's happening with Sasuke and Naruto's mission? And Sakura and Neji's. Maybe they interlink...

Anyways, great first chapter, keep it up!

THEY ARE NOT GAY YOU FUCKING WHORE I HOPE YOU BURN IN HELL




better yet:Imma shove my foot so far up your tiny ass the water on my knee will quench your thirst, you'll be tastin blood for 9 months and you'll be eatin shit through a tube for 3



FANGIRLS(Aka:FAGS) piss me off so much that one day im gonna go around carrying an uzi and when i see one imma blast her