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September 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loved this, it was great. Laptop battery my ass! That was just plain creepy. CREEPY.
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September 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OOH! Interesting. Need more
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September 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMFG. That is freaking SCARY. Wow, what an imagination you have! I'm really impressed by this, and I haven't ever seen yaoi or lemons combined with SciFi eerie stuff. That's really amazing, and you should be very proud of yourself.
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June 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
X_X Gah, please write the next chapter! Please~ It is a crime to post a story like this when it has only one chapter XD
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May 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, shit!! ooooOOOOoooo.... O_O; What the hell?!?! Now that was good! LOL My eyes got wide as plates when I read it!! Was that REALLY Sasuke that was touching him via outer body experience, or was it a 'yaoi ghost'? That was like some 'Twilight Zone' shit! Is this a one shot, or is there more? Damn, this was great!!! EM
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May 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hehe ... thanx for your reading...
but sorry ... this is just one shot .. and GuyLover was just a mystery ... (^_^)
but sorry ... this is just one shot .. and GuyLover was just a mystery ... (^_^)
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April 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
XD AHHH!! THAT WAS SO AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVED IT!! *squee*
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April 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
weird yet funny at the same time. definitely different from the stuff we usually get here. it would be cool if you added another chapter just to wrap things up a bit. ^__^
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April 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That scared me.. oo'' I enjoyed the lovely yaoiness~ Demo I'm using a laptop.. ==" And I don't have a desktop in my bedroom... OO *sigh* I am so going to have nightmares tonight. That reminded me of those jap horror stories you read on the net~ Lol. Ano sa ano sa~ I was hoping the guy on the net would be neji then naruto will start falling in love with neji then they meet offline and naruto starts spending more time with neji and sasuke will get jealous because whenever naruto gets home, he doesn't pay as much attention to him~ That would've been good too~ ^^ Demo, I really liked this story apart from the fact it's got my heart racing 100km/hr especially since I just finished watching Saw 2~ ^^;; Anyways!! Good work!! ^^ Your grammar and vocab are really good, a pleasure to read. ^^
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April 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
.....*Blinks.*...... That was creepy..... However, I think the ending was funny! You should write more off of this, it is an awsome story!