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i love this story * hands out sasunaru brownies*. this story was so cute with just a bit of angst to make this story awwesome!!! great jpb!!!! ^__~

UWAAAAAAA NICE JOB!!! i never wouldve thought of naruto having a bloodline limit, hes too dman powerful in the series already w/o the help of some super-mega-ultra-super-special-bloodline-limit-that-fathered-the-byakugan-and-sharingan too. NICE JOB!!!!!*GOOD GUY POSE*

hey i love your story the relationship between gaara and naruto scared me a bit at first because gaara was so dependant on him but then he got his head sorted which is good^^ but i was sad that they stopped kissing each other T.T i thought that was really cute!! thank goodness sasuke sorted himself out *phew* i was sared that he was gonna go off with orochimaru, im glad he stayed ^^ good work!!

I really enjoyed your story. I'm a romantic at heart and the happy ending was wonderful! Thanks for the great read.

hehehehehehhehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehe i bet they were tired in the morning...

My my my, I'm glad that I decided to hunt finished stories down, because I came across this one! It's like an utopy, I hope that the actual story was like that, everyone together and happy as they should be! Everything was just perfect, good job!

I really loved your story, and just so you know the part when Sasuke called Naruto sweetheart literally made my heart melt!!!! I've never heard Sasuke refer to him in that way and i found it amazingly sweet.

Yey you finished ending wasnt as good as I hoped but still pretty nice

THIS STORY IS SO FUCKING AWESOME XD!!! The first chapter almost put me off, good thing it didn't completely. Ah, if only the anime and manga belonged to YOU, the story, and the series would be a hell of alot better for us girls T_T :(. You know the real author should write a different version(yaoi XD!) Naruto for us girls especially to read, he'd make more money that way if he did, but then again he kinda did in the same series. Oh I should mention to all you girls, If your looking for some REAL SASUNARU go to Zettai Hentai or type it in on some search website to find it. Anyway I love the story and look forward to it being update in the hopefully near future!