rate_review Reviews

I just read the first two chapters and I like them very much. I love the way you write and how you make Naruto more mature than his usual loud self. This is the kind of stories that make me smile, so please continue with the good work

oooooo, I am so loving this. Please u have got to update a.s.a.p. and keep up the good work

Coolio, equal is always good. Do you have any idea when you're going to post the next chapter? Is it gonna be soon or is it still slowly in the works? I wanna see what happens in the next chapter, especially after that ending.

Bookworm51485,

Thanks for the review, and as for your question: The writing is in the works. Hopefully I'll be able to post it. I'm not sure though, because I'm going to be covering a lot of things in this mext chapter.

But I'm glad you're showing interest. If you want, I could alert you to an update. Just email me your answer.

JA NE

Sugoi desu~ ^^ Very interesting and original plot line you have. It is most intriguing to find out where you will take this loke-san. I hope you will update soon!! Demo.. Could it be a nejinaru fic instead of naruneji, ne~? ^^;; Onegai loke-san~?

I like pleose kipe going i whant to know how it ends.

I swear, I was losing hope in this fandom, but now it's like all the good people are coming back out. I keep finding great stories and yours is one of those. And on stop of that Naruto is for once not paired with Sasuke. That just makes it double great. I have one bit of criticism though (though this might just be a reflection of the kind of kids that I deal with), I've never in my life encountered a 2 year old who can talk that well, who has that extensive of a vocabulary. Actually I can't think of a kid that I've known who could talk that well at 9 or 10 (except me of course:D) Though like I said, this might not be good criticism, it could just be a reflection of the kind of kids I've dealt with, oh well. I still love the story, though I don't especially like the way the first chapter ended, I hate cliffhanger endings. I know that's not really a true cliffhanger ending, but it's going to have me thinking about this story quite often until you update again. Oh and I had a question that kind of went along with one of the other reviewers comments. I wondered if the story was going to be NejiNaru or NaruNeji. And in case you don't know the difference (no offense intended), NejiNaru would have Neji as the seme (dominant) and Naruto as the uke (submissive), while NaruNeji would be the other way around. NejiNaru would be nice, I haven't found a good NejiNaru story in a looooooooooooooooooong time, too many authors obsessed with Sasuke. Anyways let me wrap this up, I love your story, I can't wait for your update and I'm hoping against hope for a NejiNaru pairing.

I'd really liked to see more too this awesome fic.. you gota gift with writing.. so keep it up!