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October 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Your grammer really needs work. You need to have the entire stoty beta'ed this is rather poor.
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October 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my.I love this story so much.Please update as quick as possible.
JEEZE!What does Neji think he's doing?He belongs to Gaara and Gaara alone. >D Bringing Naruto into the situation will only make things worse.Buwahaha..I love the drama.
And Naruto is just too cute in this story.Stuck in the middle of all of this.
Gaara is awesome because..he's Gaara.Need I say more?
And Sasuke is finally going to get into Naruto's pants.Hooray!
Your teasers are just soo mean. ;_;
Well, that review was random, but I'm excited about this story and my mind can't keep focused.Sorry!Like I said before.Please update as soon as you can!
JEEZE!What does Neji think he's doing?He belongs to Gaara and Gaara alone. >D Bringing Naruto into the situation will only make things worse.Buwahaha..I love the drama.
And Naruto is just too cute in this story.Stuck in the middle of all of this.
Gaara is awesome because..he's Gaara.Need I say more?
And Sasuke is finally going to get into Naruto's pants.Hooray!
Your teasers are just soo mean. ;_;
Well, that review was random, but I'm excited about this story and my mind can't keep focused.Sorry!Like I said before.Please update as soon as you can!
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October 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YES XD!!! Finally an update with TWO CHAPPIES, thank you ^-^! An such tasty, evil teasers ^_~, you MUST update as soon as possible :-D, pretty please with sugar on top!
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October 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*Sharpens knife menacingly against a near-by rock*
I'll KILL you!!
*tries to stab Hime-Sama but trips and falls*
Ooowwww!
*starts to sob*
Why did you stop?! Why did you stop writing you...*curses a blue-streak and waves fists threatingly*
UGH! *drops shank and gives up*
This story is sooo PENG! And I just LOVE NejiXNaru pair-ups. I know this story is NaruSasu...(which by the way, can't wait to see what that whole "de-flowering" thing was about!)...but I can't help it, NejiNaru is just soooo KAWAII! Hopefully Naruto didn't murder him? It will be such a shame. Does it mean Neji likes Naruto then in a "I-love-you-and-I-hope-we-become-more-than-friends" way? Or is it more like "I'm-depressed-and-need-a-good-f*ck-you-were-the-closest-to-me-so..." hopefully it's not the latter, hm?
lol, I'm ranting again. But-GOSH!! Am I pissed you chose this moment to leave us hanging! With a cliff-hanger as well!!! *screams till the people up high hear*
Can't get this story out of my mind now...
1) The whole thing about Sarutobi and the pendant and repaying a favor back to an old friend-that's a bit obvious but I would like you to go into that more.
2) Jiraiya and Ino (LMAO btw at what happened between them before)- What will happen when Ino goes to interview Sasuke?
3) What happened to Sakura?- I hate the b*tch but let's be honest, she does make things kinda interesting. Will she kill Naruto when she finds him in Sasuke's bed?
4) Gaara- what's up with his obsession with Neji?! Neji likes Naruto, Damn you! Leave him alone! *narrows eyes at said red-head*
5) I'm still a bit confused at this. Is Naruto straight, Bi or Gay? I hope he's straight so there'll be a bit of "playing-hard-to-get" and a frustrated Sasuke/Neji from unrequited love before Naruto finally gives up (And even then he should be BI).
*tries to stop self from crying hysterically*
I HAVE TO KNOW WHAT'S GOING TO HAPPEN-NOOOOOWW!!!
PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEASE!!!!!!!
Or I'll jump! I swear-I'll Jump!!
*climbs roof of nearest building and lingers on the side preparing self for a hard, long fall which might possibly break skull and spill...* Did I make you sick? Yes? Good! Then ADD! SOON! PLEASE! I'M BEGGING! ON MY KNEES! (Hey, that rhymes!)
(^_^)
I'll KILL you!!
*tries to stab Hime-Sama but trips and falls*
Ooowwww!
*starts to sob*
Why did you stop?! Why did you stop writing you...*curses a blue-streak and waves fists threatingly*
UGH! *drops shank and gives up*
This story is sooo PENG! And I just LOVE NejiXNaru pair-ups. I know this story is NaruSasu...(which by the way, can't wait to see what that whole "de-flowering" thing was about!)...but I can't help it, NejiNaru is just soooo KAWAII! Hopefully Naruto didn't murder him? It will be such a shame. Does it mean Neji likes Naruto then in a "I-love-you-and-I-hope-we-become-more-than-friends" way? Or is it more like "I'm-depressed-and-need-a-good-f*ck-you-were-the-closest-to-me-so..." hopefully it's not the latter, hm?
lol, I'm ranting again. But-GOSH!! Am I pissed you chose this moment to leave us hanging! With a cliff-hanger as well!!! *screams till the people up high hear*
Can't get this story out of my mind now...
1) The whole thing about Sarutobi and the pendant and repaying a favor back to an old friend-that's a bit obvious but I would like you to go into that more.
2) Jiraiya and Ino (LMAO btw at what happened between them before)- What will happen when Ino goes to interview Sasuke?
3) What happened to Sakura?- I hate the b*tch but let's be honest, she does make things kinda interesting. Will she kill Naruto when she finds him in Sasuke's bed?
4) Gaara- what's up with his obsession with Neji?! Neji likes Naruto, Damn you! Leave him alone! *narrows eyes at said red-head*
5) I'm still a bit confused at this. Is Naruto straight, Bi or Gay? I hope he's straight so there'll be a bit of "playing-hard-to-get" and a frustrated Sasuke/Neji from unrequited love before Naruto finally gives up (And even then he should be BI).
*tries to stop self from crying hysterically*
I HAVE TO KNOW WHAT'S GOING TO HAPPEN-NOOOOOWW!!!
PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEASE!!!!!!!
Or I'll jump! I swear-I'll Jump!!
*climbs roof of nearest building and lingers on the side preparing self for a hard, long fall which might possibly break skull and spill...* Did I make you sick? Yes? Good! Then ADD! SOON! PLEASE! I'M BEGGING! ON MY KNEES! (Hey, that rhymes!)
(^_^)
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September 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
please update your fic! i like this fic! it reminds me a little of taming riki... please continue it...
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July 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oi! Fabulous plot bunny...keep hopping along!
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June 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
soo....you gonna update?? hmm hmmm?? you cant just leave us hanging at such a...not so good to be left hanging at point!! ><
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May 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
^^ I remember reading this before AFF.net crashed! I loved it then and I love it now! Please update soon!
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May 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great story! Love how you have Naruto being an innocent in the world. :)
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May 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ah! I just saw that I never review your story before! Wonder why...
I really love it! Well-written, interesting, original, surprising in the way we never know what to expect next, your characters are very well ic and complete, your chapters are long but absolutly not in a boring way, more like 'whoaa! It's long!' but at the end you're like 'so soon?'.
I loved the last chapter particulary too but I dunno why, loved the others too, maybe exept the one with Neji. NejiNaru isn't really my cup of tea, I'm a fervent SasuNaru fan, even if I think their friendship is one of my fav', alongside GaaraNaru friendship. And I'm not the kind that think that rivals in love are that necessary, a relationship can be difficult enough without it.
You mentioned Sand two times already, wonder when we'll see Gaara. Yeah for NejiGaara! Erm, he he he.
Is Orochimaru gonna be a bad guy? Doesn't seem like it for now but we'll never know. Just hope you won't make him be a pedophile after Sasuke's body, sure it's a good idea, if not overused. Well, okay, it wouldn't work here anyway because Sasuke isn't exactly a child, mouahaha!
I really like it when parts from the manga are used in fanfics but in a different way, like the accidental kiss.
I'm happy that we didn't see neither Hinata nor Lee, they tend to get on my nerves.I really apreciate how you use all the Naruto cast and not unnessesary ocs...
Hehehe, I'm sure we'll have a great Sakura-Ino fight over Sasuke in the Art gallery. Again, maybe not...
The paparazzis will be happy to have a great picture of Sasuke and Naruto kissing. Wait until Naruto sees that! Mouahahaha!
Hum, beside SasuNaru and Nejigaara, will you also let me hope for ShinoKiba? Those three are my fav' pairings. Well, we'll see!
Can't wait for the next chapter! Good lcuk! Ja ne!
ps: I let you my mail adress if you wanna answer me!
I really love it! Well-written, interesting, original, surprising in the way we never know what to expect next, your characters are very well ic and complete, your chapters are long but absolutly not in a boring way, more like 'whoaa! It's long!' but at the end you're like 'so soon?'.
I loved the last chapter particulary too but I dunno why, loved the others too, maybe exept the one with Neji. NejiNaru isn't really my cup of tea, I'm a fervent SasuNaru fan, even if I think their friendship is one of my fav', alongside GaaraNaru friendship. And I'm not the kind that think that rivals in love are that necessary, a relationship can be difficult enough without it.
You mentioned Sand two times already, wonder when we'll see Gaara. Yeah for NejiGaara! Erm, he he he.
Is Orochimaru gonna be a bad guy? Doesn't seem like it for now but we'll never know. Just hope you won't make him be a pedophile after Sasuke's body, sure it's a good idea, if not overused. Well, okay, it wouldn't work here anyway because Sasuke isn't exactly a child, mouahaha!
I really like it when parts from the manga are used in fanfics but in a different way, like the accidental kiss.
I'm happy that we didn't see neither Hinata nor Lee, they tend to get on my nerves.I really apreciate how you use all the Naruto cast and not unnessesary ocs...
Hehehe, I'm sure we'll have a great Sakura-Ino fight over Sasuke in the Art gallery. Again, maybe not...
The paparazzis will be happy to have a great picture of Sasuke and Naruto kissing. Wait until Naruto sees that! Mouahahaha!
Hum, beside SasuNaru and Nejigaara, will you also let me hope for ShinoKiba? Those three are my fav' pairings. Well, we'll see!
Can't wait for the next chapter! Good lcuk! Ja ne!
ps: I let you my mail adress if you wanna answer me!