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for Sealed Heart

by Hime

person Meep
schedule May 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
nyaa, if you like being in his head so much you should continue to stay there, ya?
:3
though I must say Id like to see Narutos reaction from his own prespective
and you forgot "my mouth is rotting!" or whatever it was naruto said when he and sasuke kissed in the manga
.,.
person eyes0nm19
schedule May 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Really like your story...keep up the good work!!
person ILOVEIT D.J.
schedule May 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like it so far. Please update very soon! :)
person shishiosama
schedule May 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love it! My favorite part was, well, there were three favorite parts, but one of them was when Haku told Naruto that he should call him 'bro' instead of 'sis' because he was a guy. The second part was when Sasuke fired the one guy for wearing a bright green tie, and the third part was when Naruto accidentally kissed Sasuke if front of that crowd. Right after it had been printed that him and Sakura were together! I wish that you'd update /really/ soon, I don't think I could wait long.

See ya!

Shishio-sama
person xBunni
schedule May 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Woot!! Another chappy!! *glomps hime-san* Arigatou~!! I really enjoy reading your stories. I hope you will continue on with them until they are completed. ^^
person hypnotic
schedule May 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey! update please ok this story is really good i just started it and sasuke is a uber ass, but yeah you gotta start somewhere! so update okie dokie please!

~hypnotic
person julz
schedule May 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is shaping up to be quite interesting. I especially like your characterisation of Sasuke. Looking forwards to reading the next chapter - do you have a update list or anything?
person jadephire
schedule May 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I like this so far, and I really want to see where this is going. So keep it up and hurry!!
person dakara
schedule May 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
lol..nice story..anyway..just wanted to tell you that you did some spelling mistakes ''medokse'' is not spelled like that..it's actually ''mendokuse'', and it's Inuzuka kiba, not Inuzuki , even if it sounds very cute, lol
person dar
schedule March 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
kya!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! so good!!! i can't wait till you update!!!! is sasuke gonna fall for naruto!?!?!?! ne ne ne is he!?!? KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!!!!!!!! and PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!! more sasuke and naruto smut please!!!!!!!!!!1