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for Sealed Heart

by Hime

person Trekiael
schedule December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, good chapter. That's cool nothing more happened between them. No need to rush, good things are better taken slow. Sasuke sure is a real bastard in this chapter, but well, that was to be expect after what happened with Sakura. I wonder when and in which circonstances they'll see each other again. Sasuke thinks Naruto's a whore, it's easy to understand why but in the end he should have had some doubt, well, that's also true that Sasuke in not someone to question himself. Hope Neji won't hit on Naruto, or at least not really seriously. I prefer him with Gaara. I think Sasuke had a lot of hits in this two chapters, it make him seem a little too weak for my liking, but that's ok, Naruto isn't relly weak either. Oh, and for the thing about Naruto being a whore, knowing him, he isn't clothed like one, is he? Sasuke seem a little stupid too. Hope he'll be better in the next chapter. But really, that was good! Sad it was so short. I'll wait eagerly the next chapter, good luck! Ja ne!
person losthimagain
schedule December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Akward........I like it, update, majicle put Gaara in and that about covers it...... XD

-The Update Monster
person cibiboy
schedule December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great Ch update soon
person Monkie
schedule December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay for an update!Go Naruto!No means no!Heh. At any rate, I can't wait for the next chapter. I can't believe Sasuke still believes Naruto is a prostitute.
person Monkie
schedule December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Gah!Another thing!Is there going to be a love triangle between Neji, Naruto, and Sasuke?I hope so!That'll keep the story even more interesting, but it's your fic. Also maybe..-sounds too hopeful-Iruka can play a part in the story too?-is a KakaIru fan-Heh.Like I said it's your story, but it never hurts to throw out ideas right?Once again: Update.ASAP!
person Bakura
schedule December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was more Sasuke like, because I understood he tought Naruto as a whore.
mmm. Neji's cute ^_^~!
Liked the story so far, waiting for an update ^_^~ (and want to know where it leads~)
person himeyume
schedule December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
THANK YOU FOR UPDATING!
person nicole
schedule December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NICE STORY KEEP GOING
person Sasuke_Naruto_Lover1025
schedule December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey....GREAT CHAPTER !!!!!!!!!! it was awesome !!!!!!! Naruto doesn't really get what sasuke's talking about,,,, does he?? well .... it's was awesome !!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON !!!!!!!
person MedicNinM
schedule December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aww.. Hime-sama, that was pretty short! But i did enjoy Neji's dashing rescue! ^_^