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for Sealed Heart

by Hime

person SilverTwilight
schedule December 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It was awesome!!!!! T_T How could you leave it at a cliffhanger like that? Is there going to be a lemon? Please let there be a lemon! Oh and for English not being your first language you write very well, but you did have afew mistakes, but what's a few mistakes here and there. What exactly is your first language? Oh and how old is Sasuke is he the same age as Naruto? And how rich is he exactly? And Naruto was pricless when Haku told him he was a guy!XD! And...And? T_T I forgot what I was going to ask next but Im pretty sure your tired of me rambling. I only have three more things to say....1) This story fucking rocked! 2) Update A.S.A.P and 3) It would be really awesome if you could answer my question about what your first language was! (Though you don't have to!!!!)

Can't wait untill next time! T_T I wish I was in Naruto's place right now! *cries*

- Your number hyperactive, knucklehead fan!
person Kasumi
schedule December 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
GAH! That is like...SO DAMN EVIL!!! Leaving us in suspense, Update soon!!!...Please???
person me!
schedule December 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! I need more! MORE!!!!!! good job ^_^ hehe
person eyes0nme19
schedule December 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love it!!! looking forward to the next chapter....
person Law Ren
schedule December 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
When are you goin to put the next chp up?
person cibiboy
schedule December 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like the story it has alot pf potental cant wait till next ch
schedule December 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ILIKEILIKEILIKEILIKE!!! UPDATE!!! XD XD XD
person MedicNinM
schedule December 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whoo-hoo... *^_^* now thats what im talking bout! lol... i can't wait to read more!
person Reyn
schedule December 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oooooo, definitely interesting! My only issue was with Sasuke saying 'dead last' instead of 'dobe'. It was...weird. But that aside, this story looks like it will be totally promising! I especially love how you have Kakashi ^_^
person Bakura
schedule December 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
the ending is very unsasuke like, but ho well ^^~
I liked it so far. especially Haku XDD