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December 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh
my
Gawd...
I'm lovin' it!! Please updated soon! I wanna know what happens!!!!!!!!
my
Gawd...
I'm lovin' it!! Please updated soon! I wanna know what happens!!!!!!!!
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December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O.O!!!!!!! WHOA!!!!!!!! Twist at the end! Sasuke's a perv! <3 Er....
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December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG !!!! lol... great chatper... and story !!! Poor Naruto.... but GO sasuke !!! lol please update soon
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December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Woah... steamy!! More please! x3
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December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yeah! Definetly like it! Whoa, I love it when Sasuke's a perv toward Naruto, but I didn't think he would in this story. I loved every part of it: Sasuke kicking Sakura bitch out, the encounter between Naruto and Haku, th part with Kakashi the driver, and of course the end, that's a good cliffanger. I think that maybe it's happenning a little too quickly between them, but really that depend of what will happen next. It's good when you can't know what it'll have in the next chapter at all. Well-written exept a repetition of "as lond as he can remember" or something like that in Sasuke's part with Kakashi. Good job. Good luck for the next! Ja ne!
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December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice.I'd recommend someone to beta your story though.Some grammatical errors here and there, but they are easy to ignore.Uhh...please tell me Naruto is going to beat the crap out of Sasuke for touching him in such a way!They should get to know each other first then screw around.And was Sasuke supposed to pick up Naruto, or was it someone else!?Gah.Just update ASAP please. ^_^
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December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NEED TO UPDATE BAD ASAP COME ON UPDATE COME ON U KNOW U WANT TOO!
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December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wake me up before you go go? omg dats tha gayest song ever!! XD still, im lurvin it!!
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December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
totally love it....you just can't stop it there....more i say!
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December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Gah!!! more i <3 this story!!!!! more sasunaruness, yes!!! .....plz?