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person Law Wren
schedule December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait for the last part. Hope there is a major lemon! Drool....
person valanthe
schedule December 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whaaaa, why there's no part 3 already :) I want more :)

You story is really amusing, continue, continue, continue
This can only be better :)
person Anon
schedule December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
but i thought they already had sex im your other chapters sasuke has already stuck his dick up naruto many times like in chapter 3
person naruke
schedule December 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WORDS CAN'T DESCRIBE WHAT I THINK OF THIS STORY SO, 'CAUSE I ABSOLUTELY LLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE IIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIITTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
WRITE THE NEXT CHAPTER! 'CAUSE I LIKE A JEALOUSY SASUKE AND THE PLAN OF MAKING NARUTO JEALOUSY!!!!!!!
person omg
schedule December 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YOU STOLE THIS CHAPTER FROM AANOTHER STORY I MEAN CANT YOU COME UP WITH YOUR OWN STORIES MAN I CANT BELIEVE THIS
person OMG
schedule December 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OR MAYBE IT WAS SO GOOD THAT I HAVE READ IT 500 TIMES AND REMEMBER IT ^^ I WAS JUST KIDDING ABOUT WHAT I WROTE BEFORE THIS STORY IS THE BEST!!
person twilight_dreamer
schedule December 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg lmao I LOVE the last statement from sasuke....*sigh* I lover being a visual thinker/reader it makes everything so much more real
schedule December 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ooo naruto's in for something@!! let's just hope he figures out and gets jealous early enough and not be that stupid... XD you rock!!!
person ai-chan
schedule December 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yay~ make him jealousss xD looking forward to it~~~ write sooon~~~ (ToT)b
person Trekiael
schedule December 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hell yeah, that's good! Mwahaha! Sasuke's trying to make Naruto jealous! With Neji notheless! *sigh* if only Gaara could be jealous of Sasuke being to close to Neji, too. But it won't be this way, hum? It would be funny, an interesting return of the situation, we expect Gaara to try to jump Naruto but in fact he would be sulking with him because of Sasuke and Neji closeness, and it would put Neji in a tight situation that he didn't expect, so much for being smug in front of Sasuke. But I'm only hopping, NejiGaara is my second fav' pairing after SasuNaru, it's only fair I think that. Anyway, thank you for this great chapter. See you next, good luck! Ja ne!