AFF Fiction Portal
person ANDYJ
schedule November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So sweet and fluffy! Ah....I'm so addicted to SasuNaru now. Good job! Keep on writing coz' i'll be anxiously waiting for the next chap!
person Lori
schedule November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awwww... how cute.. I adore this couple! *squeals* it was just so adorable I love it! to bad you didn't wright the part when they screwed XD lol... yaoi smex is always so hawt^^;;; haha.. well anywho I really love this story^__^
person HimeYume
schedule November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was so KAWAII I hope u make more fanfic in the future!
person chi no hana
schedule November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O.O *speechless* *drool*
person Gingitsune
schedule November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hehe this is so sweet! 'Love me' written in ramen? Only just for Naruto. I'm enjoying reading this story. So Naruto is the uke ne? Well, there must have been a battle some where before Naruto is resigned to being uke. More? *grins*
person rachi(I\'m too lazy to log in...)
schedule November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, please write another one of these little stories soon! They capture my attention. (Which is very hard to do because my imagination pulls me along wherever and whenever it pleases to places unknown by the common man.) I especially loved the second one. Ramen, the glue that holds lovers together. ^-^ But I also enjoyed the first one. Chapter, I mean. Anyhow, thank you for writing another one so quickly! And I do hope you do the same with the next chapter? *pouts* Please? Anyhow, really enjoyed it, please update soon!
^-^
~rachi~
person Trekiael
schedule November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I always knew Sasuke was a perv who love rvashing his little blond. Making Naruto forgive him by ramen is a great idea, especially by writing 'love me' in the bowl. That was cute! Hope more smut in the next chapter! Good luck!
person yurathewicked
schedule November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yay! more fluffy one-shots to come!

i really liked this short. it was cute and refreshing- please keep going!
person laquincia
schedule November 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I Loved it can't wait for the other chapters email me when you do fishine (spelling off) well bye.

person Trekiael
schedule November 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, that was funny! I esecially like the statement Sasuke make at the end. They're both passionate persons, so the sex can only be rough! Well good luck with the next chapter! Ja ne!