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December 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
nosebleed,Gaara/Temari's stories are hot as hell as always
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September 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Shit man, that was hot. @__@ Very descriptive, and I liked how you had a bit of plot in the beginning before the actual smut. You should totally write a second chapter. <333
Also, ignore the idiots who flamed you. They're moronic for clicking the story in the first place since you clearly stated that it was GaaTema and Sandest. *rolls eyes* Some people are just retarded.
Anyway, loved this and hope for more from you soon!
Also, ignore the idiots who flamed you. They're moronic for clicking the story in the first place since you clearly stated that it was GaaTema and Sandest. *rolls eyes* Some people are just retarded.
Anyway, loved this and hope for more from you soon!
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August 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
it was great keep up the good work
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August 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The story was good but you should use pronouns more freely. There are only two characters present so it won't become confusing. The use of Temari and Gaara's names so often is very distracting and breaks up my concentration visually when reading.
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June 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
tch... i may be a fan of yaoi and hentai but i didnt read THAT because i know for a fact that temarai and gaara r bro and sis... i wouldn't even read that disgusting story. incest is gross.>.<
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May 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Do you write anything else but stupid incest? That's all you write.
Are you attracted to your brother or sister? It must have been fun growing up with you.
You're sick.
Are you attracted to your brother or sister? It must have been fun growing up with you.
You're sick.
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May 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i love this fic, i'm such a pervert smut smut smut we must have more! I guess every one here is a pervert in one way or another this is adult fanfiction where all our perverted thoughts run wild! woohoo! i hope you update soon!
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May 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I don't usually like incest fiction, but this one was hot!
You made me see incest in a whole different way.
I'll be reading more of it now thanks to you.
-winks- -huggles- -snuggles-
You made me see incest in a whole different way.
I'll be reading more of it now thanks to you.
-winks- -huggles- -snuggles-
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May 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
All I can say is WOW!...I am a bit spechless. Very good stuff!