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Hey!
It's been a while since you last updated...
I am sorry I dind'd review any of the other chapters...
I read this fic about one year ago and although I don't remeber all the things that happened I can#t forget about it. that's why I am reviewing now.. hoping that maybe you'll write a new chapter or at least a new story so that I can enjoy more of your writing skills

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I'm sorry I didn't review every chapter. My only excuse is that I was so keen to read the next chapter that I didn't want to stop and review. I love this story. I love the way you interact Sasuke and Naruto. I could totally see it happening. I can't wait to read what happens next (hopefully Sasuke will take the surgery and they'll live happily ever after - I'm such a sap for a happy ending).

This is a beautiful story. It's one of the most touching things I've ever read. It's been a little over a year since you've updated last. I'm not to going to get on you about it, because you ended in a comfortable place. I just wanted to tell you that this is amazing and to thank you for writing it, it's a damn shame it didn't get the attention it's worthy of, it may be because your beginning is a little sticky, but after that - oh my God. You have the characters down pat, like you've been carrying them in your back pocket. Especially Kakashi, I've never seen him represented so perfectly. I've seen people come really close, they get the wisdom part down, but only you got the infuriating part down :). And Sasuke, you handled him masterfully, not too many others can hit that balance of bastardly and sweet that makes him so lovable. Of course Naruto is Naruto and there's no way anyone could not love him. I also adore the angle you chose to take for this story. Not to be cheesy but it reminds me of 'The Notebook', and not the movie, the book. It has that sort of helpless beauty and love to it, and of course the back and forth format and hospital setting is similar. I know your issues on plagiarism and I'm not accusing you of anything like that. Because the similarities are of setting and feeling alone. I wanted to bring it up because that book is one of my favourite ones. But I liked your story more :). I can't begin to fully explain how you've touched me with this, for a myriad of reasons I'm unwilling to divulge. I just wanted you to know that you did ♥

This is an amazing story! I was sad to see you hadn't updated in so long, but I hope you will soon!

just wondering if you'll update anytime soon? i've been checking almost everyday XD
would really like to know, please email
thanks!

Wow! Its been 7 months since your last update. If this story was taking place in real life Sasuke probably would be dead. Are you updating on another site or just stuck on this story? Well, I hope that you haven't given up on this cause I really have missed it.

ok its now 3am here and my eyes hurt sooooooooooooooooooooooo much
but i couldnt stop, that was one of the most amazing most IC piece of naruto fanfiction i've ever read. you probably get that a lot, but theres no harm hearing that more than once huh? :D
i love that sasuke is such a prick, and so stubborn and just so sasuke
i love that naruto waggles his eyebrows whens hes being pervy
i really like that kakashi knows just what to say to irritate sasuke
usually, when theres flashbacks, i got annoyed and confused, but in this fic i find myself looking forward to the flashbacks, (probably because thats where the lemons are XD)
you couldnt improve this story if you tried, its just that perfect.
i have an exam tomorrow, but reading your story nonstop was SO worth it
you own my soul, and i hope you update soon

XXX

Are you a god or something? I love this story to no end.
Update soon

this is possibly one of the best sasu/naru fics i've read in a long time. Everyone is so in character that it's scary. I absolutely love the dynamic between naruto and sasuke and how he's still such a child eventhough he's suposedly all grown up. I'd love to read the rest of the story and see how it all turns out! Will sasuke be able to return to being a nija? will his and naruto's relationship change? All i can do is stay tunes for the next episode, i mean chapter, and hope that it comes along sooner rather than later. Keep up the good work!