rate_review Reviews

absolutely beautiful. Your story was just so good I have no words. You made me shed some tears,I loved when Sauske was in the hospital and he kept asking if Naruto had eaten; it really showed how much he cared for him, it was really lovely. I bow to your greatness! You transition so smmothly between their past and present, its done unbelievably well. Keep up the good work and I hope you update the story soon. Drop me a line when it does get updated. Thanks!

This was my absolute favourite chapter! I loved just about every word (even the ones with mistakes). ;) Awesome Awesome Awesome!

damn. you did an amazing job with this story. you wrote poetically, beautifully, poignantly. i wanted to cry so many times in this story. i wanted to hold the boys and i wanted to make them feel better. you've got an unparalled story here. you're amazing, you are creative and inventive and emotional. you know how to create a story and a world that is real and interesting to the reader. you've done an amazing job with this story and i'm anxiously awaiting your next update. sasuke's going to have the procedure, but is it going to work? please, update soon, i'm waiting and if it's not too much trouble, i would love for an email to come when you do update.

thank you!
~hanyou-elf

Awesome! I love how in character Naruto and Sasuke are. It makes the story so much more satisfying to read. Plus your sex scenes are damn hot. ^^ Which is the point, half the time. Nice! Looking forward to reading the rest of it. :D

I'm in love with this story. It's beautifully written with just the right amount of everything in it! You're a wonderful writer and I am deeply moved by how well you describe every feeling that they have and share. Amazing. Just plain amazing. I'm so sad that you haven't updated, though! I do hope that whatever is keeping you from doing so will get cleared up, soon. I'm going to continue to wait patiently for more and until then, i'll keep re-reading the chapters I have! ^^

-Xo

*rubs eyes* Ah, you've got me weeping all over the place. You're amazing, you know? To fit all those morals and reasons into a story. This is such a beautiful story, please update soon =)

yo shakster! your story is awesome! though it's sad too...i can't wait to see what happens next but i sure hope Sasuke won't die. and the flashbacksaren't confusing and wow can't wait for the next chapter

Wow..

This story is..breathtaking.. I can't describe it. All the emotions and suspense..It was driving me insane..! In a good way of course.. I was like "Egad, Sasuke you're so mean..!" But then it woudl change suddenly..And make you go "awwww"..

The whole "Did you eat?" Thing..Was just too cute. Lol. :)

And YES~ Finally!! I'm so happy he's gonna get the procedure..! Yooosh! Great job..~! I can't wait for another chapter. It'll definately be the highlight of my day.

I guess maybe I was wrong. Will Sasuke survive? Obviously, I'll just have to wait and see.

There are still a few word problems, as in using the wrong one. I could point them out, if you want, but I doubt you do.

Anyway, what I really love about the way you write is how well I can feel the emotions when reading. The pain, sadness, denial, joy, desperation, guilt, and most especially how Naruto loves Sasuke. (And deep down how Sasuke loves him back.) It's just perfect.
Great job! Can't wait to read the rest.

very, very good chapter. I must say that I was probably almost in tears while reading it.
I will just say this since there is nothing else to say, keep up the good work.
I have to say, you're a very good writer.