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wow...that was wonderful! everything... the flashbacks... the neji thing....just wonderful. No flippin' lie. I loved how sasuke was just seconds away from beating everybody's ass! Kiba...Neji...it was mind blowing... the passion in the bedroom...mouth watering...update ok. like soon...maybe today...you know...like in the hour...heh just joking. though you gotta keeping going on this story.

...just...wow!

~Ja!

Basically....I FRIGEN LOVED LOVED LOVED!!! Chapter 3...I mean, omFg!! hahah omg
hahah so giggly and happy! >< Im glad it wasn't all angsty! Im just getting more anxious tho...
I really want this story to have a good(meaning happy...no dieing)ending...
hmm...well, if it is going to have one of those^^ endings, would you mind emailing me to let me know
before I read the last chapter, or whichever chapter will tell me that It will, cuz I cant handle sad endings
sometimes and I dont want to go all emo on my friends and such hehe ><'
Thanks and keep up the good work!!

S2

AWESOME chapter, very very well written, great job!

I liked the idea with the note from Neji, it kept me guessing what's inside it till the end! Liked how it turned out too, it wasn't really what we all were expecting.

Sasuke's such a bastard, someone should *knock* some sense into him (wink, wink).

Update soon, alright?

great chapter, again...
i love how were finding out a little more about there past as the story progresses....
can't wait to find out what happens next...

I can't wait to read more of this. It's so depressing, but very few fics keep the characters, in character. Such a good story so far!

OMG, this is incredible. Please you have got to update and I mean a.s.a.p.

I liked this new chapter just as much as the last. Naruto must really love Sasuke because he can be a complete ass at times. Especially since it seems he had a choice between Sasuke and Neji and Neji would very likely be less of an ass to him. I'm guessing this is going to be a 10 part story, based on your numbers. Does this mean that you have all 10 parts already written or are you just planning for 10? And also are you going to end at the point that Sasuke does or doesn't have the surgery or are you planning to show a bit of the future after that point? The reason I ask is because of the quickly implied possiblity of Sasuke and Naruto having kids, any chance of seeing that happen? Anyways, enough of the questions. Again I really loved this chapter, despite how depressing it is at points. Other stories make an attempt at talking about Sasuke and the affect his family's murder had on him, but yours is the only one that actually made me feel sorry for him and to feel like I could really understand how and why he ended up the way he did. I don't especially like Sasuke as a character but you actually made me feel for him which isn't an easy thing to do because I tend to be a bit heartless towards characters I don't like. And I definitely feel for Naruto, that scene with Sasuke leaving made me want to cry. I can imagine his desperation, trying to get to Sasuke physically and emotionally, but not able to make it. So sad, I hope that the story gets happier soon and I hope that Naruto can convince Sasuke to have the surgery and it turns out well. I'm not going to assume that you're going to give the story a happy ending, but I'm definitely hoping for one.



And hoping:D for an mpreg sorta. Yea I just had to add that one in for good measure. Oh yea and to add to the end your grammar and spelling are very good which makes me happy.

Oh! I feel so bad for Naruto. I hope Sasuke doesn't do something stupid.

Beautifully written, awesome job. You write both Naruto and Sasuke very well.

I liked how you had Sasuke wait for Naruto to come down from the roof so that he'd be able to catch him if he fell, that was sweet.


Can't wait till the next chapter, hopefully Naruto will kick some sense into Sasuke!

OMG! that is so sad.