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May 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was very very well written. Awesome job!!!
Is this going to be a chapter story, it better be!
I loved how you wrote the Itachi/Sasuke fight, very well done.
UPdate soon!
Is this going to be a chapter story, it better be!
I loved how you wrote the Itachi/Sasuke fight, very well done.
UPdate soon!
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May 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I'm definitely going to be following this story. I love your beginning, I love your writing style, I love your storyline, I love everything about this story. I liked the switches between past and present, I tend to hate it when author's do this because they seem to overdo the past and forget about the present but you kept a good balance. I liked the part of the fight that you showed with Itachi and Sasuke, though I wish we could have seen how he killed him, though I'm thinking we'll probably find out eventually. I can't wait until your next update, your story has me quite excited.