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January 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Update, WHEN?
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January 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I got to say,this is a rather enjoyable story. I hope you update soon.
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September 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
dude youre awesome i hope to see the next chapter soon but then again you can't rush perfection =)
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May 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE UPDATE SOON! I don't know how many times I have read this story whil waiting for an update! PLEASE UPDATE!!!
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April 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really would like to see the final chapter. I hope your still working on it and haven't just let this story die is good and I want to know how it ends.
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March 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please oh please update this story! This is the first Naruto/Tenten story I've ever read! I love how you wrote all the characters. I love Sakura and Hinata, and Neji's and Ino's personalities seem right on target. Plus(of course) the lemon's were a nice bonus! More please!
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February 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love the story don't let ino win She is a bitch.
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January 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love the story.
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January 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
once again, great chapter. I'm really glad you did not have Ino seduce Naruto here. Honestly, I think throwing a wrench in the works like that would completely derail the story. I'm sure it would be written well, as I have yet to see anything but. However, the tone of BF seems to be a kinda WAFFy love thing and I'd hate to see that change. This story makes me happy. Bottom line, though, that's just my opinion. Please keep up the good work.
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January 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ha, what a nice chapter. It's good to see how both Naruto and Tenten are quickly developing strong feelings for each other, and the fact that Ino is butting in is also interesting... but I think she should try to blackmail Naruto, not seduce him. Anyway, that's just my opinion.
As usual, great going, keep it up.
As usual, great going, keep it up.