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A very very good fic. I never really thought of these two being a pairing(I'm more of a Naru/Saku fan myself). You however really sold me on this pairing, and I really like how you presented both of them. Please keep up the good work, i'll keep an eye on this one!

This is an amazing and well written story. I can't wait to see the conclusion... or next few chapters if you do that thing you wanted to do.

You know, I've always seen that option for allowing people to update their own chapters to stories and I've always wondered who would have the audacity to do that. Its such an odd thing to do. Obviously someone's put alot of time and effort into each and every one of these stories here, especially multi-chapter fics, and you have to have some set of balls to just up and continue someone else's story with your own path. I mean, I know this story hadn't updated in a long while (I love this story, btw) but unless the author specifically states that they will no longer be continuing it and is leaving it open for someone else to finish, I don't think you just up and complete it for them.


Its like a painting. If I'm painting something, do you just color in all the details without asking? No, of course you don't. The same should go with writing.


Anyway, keep up the great work. There are not enough TenTen/Naruto pairings and this one is simply fantastic. ^^

I'm glad you're not mad. Anyway, I was surprised at how easily Ino got to Naruto in this chapter. I would have thought that after thier last interaction he would be ready for something like this. Is he really that gullable?

Never saw this pairing, but it worked! Nice job!!

It's a good thing you didn't made a NaruIno lemon here, given it does not make any sense for Naruto to have sex with Ino after she dumped him. No one in his/her right mind would engage in any sexual relationships with an ex regardless. Ino is obvious playing with Naruto here, and Naruto has every right to not fully trust his ex-girlfriend.

Now as for Ino's suggestion that Tenten is using Naruto, that's bullshit. Naruto only has to look as far as Tenten's reaction to the news that Kyuubi is sealed inside Naruto. Given Tenten accepted him fully, it should be good enough for Naruto to know that he can trust Tenten when it comes to his feelings. Also if Tenten was using Naruto to get in favor of the Hokage or someone else, she wouldn't have hit Naruto on the head in front of Tsunade in Chapter 1. Tenten would have acted too sweet and nice to Naruto in front of everyone, and this is not the case at all. She was herself, and given she is already a very good ninja, she really does not need any favors through Naruto or anyone to gain a position in ANBU or the likes. So in the end, it should be easy for Naruto see that Tenten is not using him at all, especially after they truly made love for the first time in Chapter 4 here. There's no way Tenten can fake such feelings to Naruto, who can see she truly meant them. :)

So you can easily end this story with one more chapter, where Naruto and Tenten will come out in the open regarding their feelings for one another as well as no longer hide their relationship from their friends and everyone in Konoha. In the end, they end up in a loving relationship that lasts for the rest of their lives together. A happy ending all together. :)

I look forward to the next chapter whenever it comes out. I honestly had been thinking a few days ago when the next chapter of "Beneficial Friends" will come out, thus I'm glad this story has been updated and will be finish on happy note for Naruto and Tenten. :)

I have a feeling Ino is playing dirty. Tenten needs to beat the crap out of her!!! :-) Great job!

I really loved reading this. This is an unusual pairing, but it's written very well. I would hate to see Ino screw this up though. Update soon.
Rox

Oh, man! I sure hope you're not too busy to finish this fic! I've really really liked it so far, so I'd love to see an update soon.

Please, Please, Please???

I really enjoy this story and the pairing. It is one I have never considered but within your story it is appropriate. I can't wait for more!