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Geor-Sama, I know that you don't like people making their own chapters for your works, but I have an idea for a side-story to this. It would be the conversation Naruto has with Hinata about how to perform oral sex on a woman. I was wondering if I have your permission to write this.

this story is off the awesome charts!!!! but lets get the masters thoughts on this oh Jiraiya...what do you want shadow your interrupting my research...this is worth it sit down and read this story (sits down and reads..........then jumps up) WOW i give it 2 thumbs way way way way up...that’s what i say....do me a favor shadow tell me when chapter 4 is up....will do boss....good now back to my research....later boss and see you later as well

loved it, I'm loving the story, the pairing is my fav part about this, never knew how cute a TenTen/Naruto pairing would be, its great seeing them together, and its like a breath of fresh air from all the sasuke/sakura crap on here, not that isn't done well, I just don't like the character of Sasuke, he's just too Emo for me, anyway goodjob on the last smut scene, loved it, the cuffs, the blindfold it was hot good job and keep the chapters coming *faves*

My apologies, Geor-sama, I didn't mean to force your hand on this. I just spotted that chapter on another site and assumed you had forgotten to add it on here. I meant no offense. Also, I'm really looking forward to chapter four, because I know it'll be great.

This is maybe the best Naru x Ten with or without a lemon on the web. Then you put a twist with Sakura finding out, and i'm like the last guy want she is doing with a key to his home, can it be more or is it just becuase they are teammates. Maybe it's Ino in a henge. Can't wait for the next chapter, update it very soon.

P.S. I feel its only right that since Tenten took Naruto's cherry that he should be given the right to take Sakura's. I'm mean it really doesn't seem that Sakura would let Lee get in her pants and from the why iot looks set up, Sakuras nd Hinata could be going though some problems and had gone to Naruto for help but finds him and Ten-chan. Oh the many possiblies you can pull with this story.

HA HA>>> YES! Caught red handed!! ^^

I absolutely loved this. I don't think I've ever read a real pairing between Tenten and Naruto before, but this one is absolutely fantastic! I'd have to say you've gotten all of the characters right. None of it felt OOC. Naruto's and Tsunande's interactions were so enjoyable dead on - and Tenten's shocked reaction to it - that the whole thing was funny as hell. Oh, and did I mention the smut? Shit, I wish my boyfriend was that good. x_@ (hehe, he does alright... but damn it, I want some of what Tenten's getting! ^^)

Like I said, I absolutely loved this. Keep up the good work! I'm looking forward to chapter four. :)

This story is getting to be quite good with the plot and drama unfolding as Tenten and Naruto's intimate relationship slowly would be known to the public. That public kiss would definitely start the gossip flying within the Konoha gossip grapevine, and of course, Sakura finding Tenten in Naruto's apartment would do as well. Though I wonder why Sakura has free access to his apartment, and why is she at his apartment so early in the morning?

Also is Ino still angry at Naruto for that 'prank' he pulled on her? That glower she gave at Tenten and Naruto doesn't bold well if the bitchy Yamanaka wants revenge or something.

The most interesting part of the unfolding story is the growing relationship between Naruto and Tenten. It started out as 'just friends', then became 'friends with benefits', but I sense that both are feeling more for each other as they get to know each other than in the bed. This and that they each will not want to have sex with anyone else than each other. Sounds very much like Naruto and Tenten are slowly falling in love with each other, it seems. :)

See? You started as a one-shot but it's growing to become a good story with believable plot and emotions for the characters, especially Naruto and Tenten. :)

I look forward to more chapters in the future. I particularly like to know the answers to the questions that cliffhanger left open. :)

Brilliant. I say you should just leave it complete there. That's an amazing end.

I love this fic finally somebody does a Naruto/Tenten pairring hellto me it looks like almost everybody think Naruto isn`t good enough to be paired up with anybody else other then Hinata so THANK YOU for making a Naruto/Tenten pairring the only thing I can say is god Tenten is HOT and that I cann`t wait till you update again I just hope that the next update lol Sakura joins in lol that and I just hope that you will update more often becase I LOVE THIS FIC

LOL, you definitely have to keep this up. I can't wait for your next chapter!! I love this pairing, good job!