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July 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Haha... how interesting. That was a pairing I never thought I would see. And Naruto - Ino? hehehe... man, I never thought about it. Anyway, I hope you write more chapters. Keep it up!
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July 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow *_* ::gets all starry-eyed::
I was beginning to think you'd never update like you promised in chapter one, but I checked this on a whim and loe and behold you updated!! XD I'm so very happy!!!
Not a lot of Ten/Naru love, so this is a really cool thing. Please update again, but sooner this time (if you can), please? *_*
Later! ^^
~KF~
I was beginning to think you'd never update like you promised in chapter one, but I checked this on a whim and loe and behold you updated!! XD I'm so very happy!!!
Not a lot of Ten/Naru love, so this is a really cool thing. Please update again, but sooner this time (if you can), please? *_*
Later! ^^
~KF~
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July 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really love the story so far. I hope you write more.
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June 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this is awesome!
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April 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ok, I really like this story. You've done a really great job with it. Only thing I have to say is that I'd like to see one or two more chapters that kinda formalize Naruto and Tenten's relationship. You've shown (at least in my opinion), that where they may have been "friends with benefits" at the beginning, they seem to be developing into a real relationship. After all, Tenten sees somthing deeper than friendship in Naruto's eyes and is happy that his first time was with her. Either way though, can't wait for the next part.
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April 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great story the best naru/ten that I have read
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April 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I hope you continue this one really good smut story. I love it heh
You should involve Ino more, but seriously let it be Naru/ten, but make ino realize what she missed with naruto. Naruto is a pimp!
You should involve Ino more, but seriously let it be Naru/ten, but make ino realize what she missed with naruto. Naruto is a pimp!
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April 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ohhhhhh i love can't wait for more ^_^
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April 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
pretty good. i remember reading the first chapter a while ago and didn't think there would be a second. glad you made one. really enjoyed this. always loved the couple. plus a nice prank to end a story is always a good way to go. are you going to keep this up or was this it? i am only asking cuz i was sure it was a onesotand i was obviously wrong.
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April 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like that you made Tenten and Naruto be friends with benefits. Yet, given what you've written, this can become a story where the two slowly become something more as they realized their feelings for each other. Sometimes sex do lead toward a real relationship, and given Tenten doesn't shun Naruto for being the jailer of the Kyuubi, she's a good candidate to be Naruto's first true serious relationship. (Ino's relationship with Naruto was a farce given how she shunned him.)