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October 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good story, you should add another chapter to two.
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October 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was just plain _good_. A few spelling and grammar errors here and there, but the feel and flow of the story were just right.
I hope you write another chapter to this!
I hope you write another chapter to this!
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October 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
There really needs to be more Naru/Tenten fics! Thumbs up for writing this one; I hope you'll continue!
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October 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really love this story I have alwys wanted to see a story with Naruto and Tenten paired up but never see it until now I would love to see more to this story heck I wis more ppl would write more Naruto and Tenten pairing now that would be cool
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September 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
nice job, i wonder... is there more?
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September 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The first chapter was very well done and beautiful. It shows that Naruto was not alone and shows a softer side to the weapons mistress. I can't wait till the next chapter.
But I do believe you were hacked into or something for the second chapter I saw was not the same nor any where near what I feel you would do.
Anyways update soon.
JK-chan
But I do believe you were hacked into or something for the second chapter I saw was not the same nor any where near what I feel you would do.
Anyways update soon.
JK-chan
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September 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well the first chapter is awesome! The second chapter is questionable... hehe!
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September 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ah, I see now. You did an awesome job on this story! Naruto NEEDS more love! Delete that second chapter and write more! If it don't let you delete, then complain to Jaxxy, I'm sure she can fix it.
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September 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey I like how you started the story off. But what about Hinata and Sakura how come they didn't go to Naruto to see if they could have a relationship before they went to each other. And I never seen TenTen and Naruto being a couple.. E-mail me at JTB8834@aol.com and why didn't you make chapter two longer than yeah suck my dick tenten
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September 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
lol they need to fix it so that not just anyone can add chapters to stories