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May 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Excellent story! I hope that you do write more chapters to this story.
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May 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
really great story! (nice plot!)
i like your style and your ideas!
*gg* it was really cute when naruto and tsunade "talked" and tenten watched them confused!
oh and thank you for writing a tenten/naruto story! - i really love this pairing! (what a pity there are so few stories of them...)
i like your style and your ideas!
*gg* it was really cute when naruto and tsunade "talked" and tenten watched them confused!
oh and thank you for writing a tenten/naruto story! - i really love this pairing! (what a pity there are so few stories of them...)
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May 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very nice. I am definitely looking forward to more.
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May 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
nice story, you did a good job with the character interactions, particualrly the scene with the hokage and the final one. It would be nice to see more of this.
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May 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this story is really good so far, really nice descriptions, interesting story. really got into it. Hope to see other chapters as long too.
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May 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
don't know if you plan on writing more for this story, but it is a good story, and i'd definitely read another chapter
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May 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. Hope you do write more of it. Its hard enough to find a good het fic of naruto, let alone one as goods as this, and even more so with a pairing that isn't cliche.