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August 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Heh, heh. Icing.
I really liked that story.
I really liked that story.
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August 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG! OK that was sweet, funny, and HOT. I really love the ending (icing indeed!) *runs off to take a cold bath.* Keep up the good work!
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August 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
heheheheheh! I loved it! You have to do more! please!
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March 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You should soooo make a sequel to this. I loved the plot and the story line, it was so...what's the word? Cute, sexy, intriguing and anything else that I can't think of right now.
Sequesl! Sequel! Sequel!
Ki`Tara
Sequesl! Sequel! Sequel!
Ki`Tara
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October 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
dear lord... -fans self- this was such a cute and wonderful story!
icing...hehe...
lilithwolf@excite.com
icing...hehe...
lilithwolf@excite.com
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October 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Icing!? Oh, how I love the way your storys end. XD
Cute, fluffy, hot(XD), well written (I think you said "were" when you should have said "was" somewhere...can't remember ^^;;; *not helpful*). A little OOC, but I could care less =P I like the way you write them. ^^
Cute, fluffy, hot(XD), well written (I think you said "were" when you should have said "was" somewhere...can't remember ^^;;; *not helpful*). A little OOC, but I could care less =P I like the way you write them. ^^
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September 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I liked the story and all, even though it seemed to move quickly in a few parts. Sasuke's thoughts in a few of the parts kind of threw me off. I think it would have made a bit more sense if it went to Sasuke before he entered the store or something, and having a few paragraphs that way, instead of just one random paragraph for each day. Otherwise I liked it, especially how you got the whole Konohamaru thing in.
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September 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was evil! Totally evil! How could you just end the fic like that? More, Author! ^______________^V
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September 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i love this one..you are an awesome writer...;-; i just wish it didn't end like that
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September 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ICING!!!!!! BWAHAHAHAHAHA