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*sniffles* I wasn't sure what to expect reading Gaara/Kabuto but I'm happy that I did ^__^V

This pairing is so much crack I never ever would have thought about it and yet here I am reading it. Yeah, it was pretty sappy, but I get in those moods (rarely) too! I prefer OroKabu since it's so NOT sappy XD More like hardcore. But I like it ^^ I will read if you continue! May I ask though, where in the WORLD did you come up with this pairing?

oh thank god u didn't end with a "I love you" "I love you 2 seen"-- cus then that would be even sappier!!!!! U have more of an origional love seen. lol. good job. ^^

wow this is a big improvement

thankyou for writing from garras pov it helped to clear up why he would just take in kabuto like that

i would love to read another chapter if you write it

much love

dmismine

You have throughally corrupted my mind. I mean... wtf? No no, in a GOOD way! I swear! o.o I'm just surprised is all. Wow, this... I'm a huge fan of Oro/Kabu and all, and even Kabu/Sasu, but I've never seen such an attempt at something such as Gaa/Kabu. Wow! Great job!

damn, that was sexy hott!!! sounds so like Orochimaru too (kinky bastard XDDDDD!!!) ^_^ good job!

Oh, my god...

I think I just shit myself...

HOLY SHIT!!

CONTINUE THIS, OR I'LL HUNT YOU DOWN AND--

Erm, heh, PLEASE continue this, I never thought of a GaaraxKabuto...

Wow!

No, really, WOW!!

HOLY SHIT!!

CONTINUE THIS PLEASE!!

I normally hate angsty things, but there are a few acceptions to the sub-genre (I don't really consider it a whole genre; it branches off of drama) that I can't get enough of. I can't really explain what they are. I hate stuff with cutting and suicide in it. I hate suff where everyone complains all the time. I hate...a large percentage of rape stories.

I do, however, like stories where people have genuine things to angst about, but don't angst. Like this, Kabuto's so desperate to be needed, he's ecstatic that Oro is fucking him violently, even though he would eventually leave him there to die.

You MUST put Gaara and Kabuto together and continue the story! It's so friggin awesome!

Toodles!!

Well, that was interesting. Gaara/Kabuto is not a pairing I ever would have considered. I'd be interested in reading more if you decide to write something longer.

well the story was good, if a little short. If you are going to write more i would like that.
the only thing i had a problem with is the way garra and kabuto suddenly click tike that

how did garra know what that look ment
if kabuto thought he loved orochimaru how could he suddenly just go to garra like that
why would garra suddenly decide he wanted the love of an obviously abused former ememy

so I guess i enjoyed the first part of the story. it really fit those two and i could almost feel kabutos deasperation so kudos for that. maby if you left out the part with garra it wouldn't feel so jumpy.
or you could just write more, show me i'm wrong and make me eat my own words.^-^

Good Luck
YAOI may you always float my boat

wow that was great i am curious to what will happen if you do continue....OH PLEASE CONTINUE!!!!