rate_review Reviews

I was extreamly peeved when i rated the first chapter and found that there werent anymore.....*whines* I want more! Yah know I dont usually like Sakura/Sasuke fics but this one is awesome, thanks and please could you write me when you come up with the next chapter.

Ah, that was soooo HOT! I love this sexy Sasuke!
Please, don't tell me this is an one-shot...It'd be wonderful if you wrote more... pretty please? *_*

Oh i hope there is more, please write more Sasusaku, it the best paring ever! ^_^

that was very good!!! god i can't imagine where it would have went if this wasnt a oneshot!~~ byby~yu~

Wow! Very well written! & smoldering! And for being AU you did a great job with all the personalities, from Sasuke's superior attitude down to Shizune's frantic shouting at Tsunade.

O.O Tell me it doesn't stop there! Tell me she's smart enough to connect the word "nephew"! AHHH!

Incidentally, that was amazing. The sensuality of the words match the sensuality of the dance implied. The only critique I have is repetative/recurring use of the same adjectives in a couple places. But that'd be about it. Lovely.

-Brans

Wow, great discriptions, great actions, great humor, and great imagry...all in all I'd say this story rocked. Really good job describing the dance..although you really didn't it felt like you did, and it was way better than if you had...you wrote the emotions...which is really what dancing is all about...amazing job on that. I really hope you continue this, I don't know if this was intended to be a one shot or not, but I'd like to see more. Thank you so much for writting this, it was a joy to read.