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You have no idea hoew much Itachi and Sasuke's reactions make me laugh XD;

But the romantic moment between Naruto and Itachi was adorable ^^ I cant wait to read more <3 XD

Liah xx

I love this chapter! Dx;
you need to update faster xD;

i stoped reading this after the first few paragraphs

i checked your later chapters and saw the you DID get a beta but i would seriously consider having them retro-beta your earlier chapters.

i think you have good plot ideas you just lack the ability to articulate them the way you imagine them in your head, so yea thats what betas are for. They arnt a crutch they are a tool.

i imagine that if you were to fix your other chapters the way the later chapters are, that ALOT more people would read them and you would get alot more reviews.

if you do that i would be more then happy to read your story

happy writing
Krickets

this is really good, though i've had difficulty with the choppy sentences and grammar, but the last chapter was MUCH better!! i hope you update soon, i'll (probably) check back!!^_^

Hey I just wanted to tell you that I am really enjoying your fic. Its unfortunate that some ppl are giving it a low rating but I hope that will not discourage you from writing. I've been following this fic since the beginning and you are doing a good job telling a story. One thing I hope to see is Iruka and Kakashi happily ever after (side storyy?). Oh wait there is more than one thing really, I want to see more Shikamaru and Kiba's friendship with Naruto, I want to see Sasuke and Naruto getting together (Itachi needs to concede), Sai and Naruto becoming friends, and Naruto being a positive force to everyone (just like the manga). Oh and let me throw in this request too, since the Uchihas are so processive, let them see Kakashi flirt with Naruto, too (as both sexes cuz I bet he would be able to tell right away being Arashi's student and all wink wink*) and Naruto should flirt back to both Sai (and maybe Kakashi) just to exert his sexual powers....ahhhh I got that off my chest.... can't wait for the next installment! Lates, yks.

OMG HAHA XD Such sibling rivalry XD;;; It's really quite amusing XD I cant wait to read more ^^ And damn they're mean to poor Sai TT It isn't his fault Naruto's so adorable! Oo;

Hehe XD I cant wait to see more of this! ^^

Liah xx

this story is fucking awsome so far .and can you hurry with the next chapter it is getting really juicey

Oh man...I laugh every time I read one of your chapters! Thank you so much for that! Also, if you would like help editing, I'd be willing to help. It's the least I can do in return (for you making my day so much better). Thanks again!
Kel
kelliott15@berkeley.edu

OMG you have no idea how much i loved this! XD I cant wait to see Sasuke's reaction to -THAT- XD Please update soon! *glomps*

Liah xx

OMG you have no idea how much i loved this! XD I cant wait to see Sasuke's reaction to -THAT- XD Please update soon! *glomps*

Liah xx