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i loved it!!! please make more

Such a sweet little one-shot. I loved it!! You actually managed to write it without making it seeem lilke Iruka was a pervert and that it was wrong. It would be nice ot read a little continuation if you ever planned on making one. But then again, that might ruin the moment, lol. I'd love to read it otherwise. Now what else do you have around here...

I love this so much,Its wonderful.Love Love!

(Cries) For your first shota, that was great and heartfelt, especially at the end! Write a sequel!

mmm, kinky...never read this couple before but i like it...heh...made me all hot and bothered

Awesome story. I've never seen this pairing done before. And Iruka was in character - well done. However, a few mistakes have wiggled through: firstly, Sasuke was twelve and not thirteen when he became genin; secondly, Iruka didn't know Kakashi before Team 7 was established (he enquired after this unknown jounin afterwards) so Kakashi could not have teased him in school. However, little differences to canon aside, the story was good and I would really wish for a continuation.

That was... HOT!
I would never put those two together but you made it so believable and almost natural. If there's anyone who could really care for someone out of good heart only it is Iruka, and the fact that he didn't use sasuke for his pleasure just adds to the story's credibility. It's Iruka we're talking about here, right? :)

Really great! As always I want to add ^-^