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November 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
The first few chapters were hilarious :D :D :D Naru and Sasu characters were so well captured and the fox voice... priceless! I thought it would be the best story ever... but it didn't live up to my expectations... Don't get me wrong, it was nice story (and I rated it high) but just not as good and well thought in following chapters. You've rushed things too much and turned comedy into sugary romance - Sasu suddenly became nice and mushy (totally not him), the humor was gone as well. Last chapter was better but still not as funny as first ones and I don't quite like that out of nowhere Sasu turns to be the dominant lover.
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March 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
wait... I though this is Narusasu (it was great up till the last chapter but)... how come it turn to SasuNaru(TT_TT) this chapter..>_ or this whole thing is Narusasunaru(T_T)?
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December 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Aww cute.
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December 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I want a Naruto snuggle-bunny too *pouts* Why does Sasuke get all the good stuff *bigger pout*
ty for the chapter
ty for the chapter
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December 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
muhahahahahahahah!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
thanks for the laughs!!!
miko
thanks for the laughs!!!
miko
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December 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!! FINALLY!!!! I would love for that to happen .....ya I know it doesn't but still .....its what we ALL were thinking would be nice to have happen!!! SQUEEL!!!! GOOFY GRIN :)
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December 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Chap 2 The Madness Continues
I really enjoyed this chapter and find it really cute....I love the demon fox's 2cents lol...funny he's awsome.
I really enjoyed this chapter and find it really cute....I love the demon fox's 2cents lol...funny he's awsome.
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December 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Chap 3
This is getting really exciting and the suspense is killing me!! This is such sweet torture.....that I am completely hooked on your fanfiction!!! I so hope this turns into an ongoing longer story ....I just don't want to see this end anytime soon...its just going along so well and its just so much fun to read!!! PLEASE KEEP ON GOING!!! BEGGING!!!!!
This is getting really exciting and the suspense is killing me!! This is such sweet torture.....that I am completely hooked on your fanfiction!!! I so hope this turns into an ongoing longer story ....I just don't want to see this end anytime soon...its just going along so well and its just so much fun to read!!! PLEASE KEEP ON GOING!!! BEGGING!!!!!
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December 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Chap. 4
This is going BEAUTIFULLY!!! GRIN :) LOVE IT!! This is just so AWSOME!!
This is going BEAUTIFULLY!!! GRIN :) LOVE IT!! This is just so AWSOME!!
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December 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Chap 5
BLISS!!! Just PURE HAPPY BLISS!!! Fangirl Squeel!!! This was very erotic in a very SWEET way.....sigh....happy smile...:) LOVE IT!!!! I just ADORE how you write!!! I love how the characters interact and how everything is described!!! I enjoy it all!!!
HAPPY DANCE HAPPY DANCE HAPPY DANCE
I am so looking forward to the next update!!! Can't wait Can't wait so EXCITED!!!
BLISS!!! Just PURE HAPPY BLISS!!! Fangirl Squeel!!! This was very erotic in a very SWEET way.....sigh....happy smile...:) LOVE IT!!!! I just ADORE how you write!!! I love how the characters interact and how everything is described!!! I enjoy it all!!!
HAPPY DANCE HAPPY DANCE HAPPY DANCE
I am so looking forward to the next update!!! Can't wait Can't wait so EXCITED!!!