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for Surprise no Jutsu

by Trollmia

person jewel
schedule August 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
love the story so far but how is Kyubi taking to Sasuke and when will Sasuke find out?
schedule August 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
you will always be the shit never let anyone tell you different. when i say this i was on the floor trust me i was on the floor. then sasuke getting puched out by sakura was the icing on the cake. i can't wait to see the next chapter.
person blueh
schedule August 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Continue plzz!! Love it!!
person nsg
schedule August 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That's really funny. I love it when authors make up their own jutsu, especially when i get a couple laughs from it. Bad Kyuubi,stop playing w/ Sasuke's mind. At first, I thought he had a demon inside of him like Naruto but that's even better. Can't wait to see what's happens in the onsen. Hopefully a lemon.
person Katie //_^
schedule August 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love how Sai whips out his sketchbook!
schedule September 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
"and Yamato covered his heterosexual eyes to protect them from what ever they were doing down there on the cold stone floor"

Best.. line.. ever! Haha, that's awesomeness. Good job man, very entertaining bit of drabble.
person littleolmee
schedule September 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
LOL, I love it! That jutsu needs trade-marked, is that anything like kawaii no jutsu? One of those things that are irresistable? Thanks for sharing that, it really gave me a tickle.
person ghastly citrus (not logged in)
schedule September 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that is the sweetest thing.
Waff much? ^^
person Shinigami24
schedule September 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*grins* This I love! I wish the author had thought of that! There's a GOOD reason why Naruto's diffcult to read! *LOL* Sai, I want a copy of that drawing!
person Yue
schedule July 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
bwahahhaha! what an utterly crazy idea XD -sai in the background sketching-