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June 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, it's so hot! You have to post the next part soon. I cant wait!
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June 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG! PWEEEEEEEEEEEEZ UDATE ASAP!!!!!
This is just such a mega kewl idea and I can't wait for the next chapter!!!
^-^ Hehehehe Naruto is a silly boi and Iruka's just soo cute! Must see Kakashi...(whom i adore! yay!)
This is just such a mega kewl idea and I can't wait for the next chapter!!!
^-^ Hehehehe Naruto is a silly boi and Iruka's just soo cute! Must see Kakashi...(whom i adore! yay!)
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June 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
VERY hot! nice work, waiting for the next chapter X3
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May 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
one word for this chapter... HAWT!!! more please ^.^
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May 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Horay, the first part is here! ... and wow, what a first part... You did great! Top marks from me! The first part with Iruka was funny... and poor Naru-chan. Ir really did hit him hard. Nice use of the Kage Bunshin too. Reading this and having heard stories about how painfull a hard-on can be, makes me appreciate being of female gender.
No comment about grammar and spelling, cuz as german native I do not think that I am good enough to judge.
Anyway, you have us all waiting on hand and knees for the second part, believe it!
No comment about grammar and spelling, cuz as german native I do not think that I am good enough to judge.
Anyway, you have us all waiting on hand and knees for the second part, believe it!
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May 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Aww, poor Naruto. I feel so bad for him...heheheh...not. *smirk*
Nice story. I'm not gonna comment on spelling whatsoever, because I seriously suck at that. But please update soon..., although you already spoiled the coupling, it's just sooooo funny to see Naruto suffer. A bitch in heat he is. *sharp nod* And I can't wait to see Kakashi *heart*
Hm, about the Kage Bunshin... How did the copy-naru know where to put his finger, if Naruto has no idea how to go any further then mere masturbation? Did he (Naruto) experiment?
Also about your Bunshin dissapearing-talk in the end of your story, HOW exactly would Naruto use his Kage Bunshin if he DID know how to go further then jerking off? How to say/ask this... It's not sure that if Naruto enters a Bunshin, the Bunshin would go poof, but the chance is big. What about the other way around?
I'm rambling, but what you said just made me curious about your thoughts on it all... Again, please update soon.
ja ne ^^V
Nice story. I'm not gonna comment on spelling whatsoever, because I seriously suck at that. But please update soon..., although you already spoiled the coupling, it's just sooooo funny to see Naruto suffer. A bitch in heat he is. *sharp nod* And I can't wait to see Kakashi *heart*
Hm, about the Kage Bunshin... How did the copy-naru know where to put his finger, if Naruto has no idea how to go any further then mere masturbation? Did he (Naruto) experiment?
Also about your Bunshin dissapearing-talk in the end of your story, HOW exactly would Naruto use his Kage Bunshin if he DID know how to go further then jerking off? How to say/ask this... It's not sure that if Naruto enters a Bunshin, the Bunshin would go poof, but the chance is big. What about the other way around?
I'm rambling, but what you said just made me curious about your thoughts on it all... Again, please update soon.
ja ne ^^V
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May 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great story so far! Can't wait for the threesome! :)
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May 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! this is so frickin' great. i love this threesome but nobody ever does it! i'm so not moving from in front of my comp until i see and update. the only story that can make me move is 'winter release'. this is so going in my green-yaoi-book-of-greatness. (^__^)
~Devious
~Devious