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for I'm The Best!

by mischiefmaker

schedule February 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was utterly entertaining. I loved how in character you made their interactions, and you did an astounding job with the humor. I loved the way you ended it. Great work! I wish you'd write a Team 7 multi-chap. I bet it would be as good as the Teamwork series.
person Makayla
schedule October 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow this story rocks ^___^!! And that last part... XD Loveaged
person Menow
schedule November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That WAS funny. That "go train" line was great.
person Lady Moon
schedule October 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This one was really going some where, I wonder what happened to the other chapters?????
Oh well its still good, please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!
person Himoto
schedule July 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I have to say that Team 7 pairings are my absolute favorite. And while this story is fine to stand on it's own...I wonder perhaps if I couldn't bribe you to write more. ~Is greedy like that~
You have quite a knack for getting the personality of each character down well and adding a dash of humor mixed in with sexual tension that is quite refreshing to read apart from the mindless smut that most throw up on here.
person Quirk
schedule July 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loved the humor of this one, and I like the pov used, too. Your Sakura is very believe-able! Keep it up!
person Naria
schedule June 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ne? Ne?!

OY!! WRITE MORE!! THIS HAS SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO MUCH POTENTIAL!!!!!!! >o<

I mean, write some limey, if not lemony stuff!! I really like your version of Sakura! WRITE MORE!!
person Rian
schedule June 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Heehee heehee still laughing over that one! Nice job. Got any more in the same idea?
person Tomko-chan
schedule May 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It's really good and i hope you continue it^^
schedule May 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ok, there's the windup... and now the pitch? more please ^.^