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for Stages of Love: Team 7 Style

by mischiefmaker

person akasha
schedule May 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i really like these drabbles. how many more will there be? i'd like to see at least a few more. good work! hope to see more soon.
schedule May 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very nice! I like how each ficlet is self-contained, yet a continuation of the previous. You do a good job with the themes, there are no mistakes that I noticed, and all of the characters are believably written.
person Talho
schedule May 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nicely done (: Personally, I like the shortness of the chapters- descriptive but not overwhelming. And yes, the characters personalities are on the dot aswell.
Looking forward to the continuation of this.
schedule May 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i like your writing, and i love Team7 threesomes, but it's just too short =\