AFF Fiction Portal

rate_review Reviews

for A Nearly Perfect Day

by Wraithguardstar

person Anna
schedule May 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm one of ShikaTema's fans and when i read your fic all i could say is...WOW!! Beautifully written. It was quite unexpected of Shika but then again, it shows that there's a side of him that we might not know. And it all depends on the writer's imagination and creativity. Well done. So, please keep writing and updating coz it's driving me crazy to know what happens next, okay? Thanks. All The best!
person akasha
schedule May 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oohh the sexual tension mounts... can't wait to read chapter 2!
person moé
schedule May 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I could feel how dirty Temari felt, you made it seem like people were watching her, but just the possibility of people watching her gave her that feeling. Damn, Shikamaru is a sadistic bastard. xD

I like, I like! More?