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for Kakashi's Dream

by montypythonoides

schedule March 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Seems a bit out of character for Kakashi... I think you should've used Jiraiya, this seems more like a fantasy of his :)
schedule February 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ha ha ha! Cute, sexy, funny. Your descriptions were very (yummy) vivid.

Poor Kakashi! That last part was hilarious.
person Konekosama
schedule October 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
XDDDDD "I don't like sweets."

Ah! Sasuke, you're such a dreamwrecker. Probably you'll say you don't like bondage or being uke next. O_o That would totally ruin my day.

Anywho- this was funny. XD
person ANBUluuver
schedule August 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
LMAO!!! That last line made me laugh. XD
person trouble
schedule August 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
THAT WAS FUCKING HILARIOUS!!!!
short, not how and sexy. but funny as damn hell!
person Shadai
schedule July 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
dats 4 wordz but who really cares poor guy had his hopes up.
then 4 it 2 crash down and burn ta ashes. luvd it! =D
(V)u should write another page!
(..)
c(")(")
person JadenLeeFaye
schedule July 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was soo cute! i loved it i wish you could write a second chapter! I loved it though and i am a fan! *gives cookies*
person dip
schedule June 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WHHHAHAHAHAHHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!! what a bitch!!!!!! *cough* that was funny.... poor kakashi >3
person !mE
schedule June 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I don't like sweets is 4 words... but I liked the story! Hahaha, "And then he #^&$@! @# %%^ %*#@ ^%." Lol!
person HotnSpicyFox
schedule June 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
There was only one very werid thing keeping me from enjoying this fic, and that is the fact that selfishness is a major turn off for me. Almost squicky. But the ending was very funny, so nice one.