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by ladywolfTerri

person Devious Lil Devil
schedule May 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oop! meant to say that i want it to be shikamaru. there is a severe shortage of shikanaru on this site. ^__^
person luminaris
schedule May 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow! I really liked the story so far and can easily see it progressing nicely... Indeed. And I so want to know who the mysterious lover-man is, though I do have my doubts. Keep up the great work!
schedule May 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
arggh! You know i really thought it was Shikamaru...I've read "...body stretched..." and my mind skip the word next to it and registered "...next to him..." or"...on the bed..." but i was so shocked i re-read it again and DAMN it was "...body stretched on the COUCH..."

okay my bad.

Saaa...but i still want to know who is he!!!!!!!!! come on man tell us please...there would be a next chap, right?

I'm voting for Sasuke since he's the possesive one but Neji also has a place in my heart but I wouldn't mind if it was Shikamaru *wiggle eyebrow*

next chap please
person Kalariona
schedule May 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Forgot to log in. Damn.

Anyway, really cool. Well written and I'll keep an eye out for the next chapter.

I want the peson to be Sasuke. He's the most possessive one there. I wouldn't mind Neji, but Sasuke it should be.
person Shosuro
schedule May 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was ggggggggggggrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrreeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaatttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt!!!!!! I hope it was Sasuke... but it sound like Neji. Wonderful job!!!!
person Inuzuka
schedule May 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*cough, blush*

Well written...

o_O

Is this to be a one-shot? (:( @ that)
person MarsInsane
schedule May 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
::bounces up and down:: Gah!! I wanna know. Its good. Very well written and defineatly got me caught. ^.^;;
person Suki
schedule May 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
for teh winz! =) This was incredibly spicy. Do keep up the good work! Judging by your past writings, I'd say mystery boy is Sasu-pants, but it'd be REALLY funny, if it was Kiba. *grin* But I still want it to be Sasu-pants.
person sapphirexkat2
schedule May 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow wow wow!

can you PLEASE write another chapter? I want to know who it is, though the possessive-ness of Naruto's mystery lover kind of implies... well yeah.

heehee. great job!