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by ladywolfTerri

person Nothing
schedule June 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Love the story. Poor Naruto. My face would be soooo red if some one sent that to me during class. (Dies) xD
person wendyghost
schedule June 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hey, this is so cool, i hope that its Sasuke! really want it to be Sasuke so my vote is for him!
person Bookworm51485
schedule June 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You might as well just write the story with Sasuke as the stalker, there is no way anyone else is going to win. Though I think that the stalker sounded a lot like Itachi or Gaara at points, but more like Itachi with the dark hair on the pillow. But oh well, I agree with the person who said that no matter who wins the poll the story will still be good because the author is good. And you are good, but I still can't help being slightly disappointed that the people voting couldn't see there way to picking an original choice. But I'm hoping that you will write another story with a non-SasuNaru pairing because I like your writing and I'm having a hard time finding good, well-written Naruto stories like ItaNaru, GaaNaru, or NejiNaru. And it's a bit annoying that people make me seem like an annoying whiner because I'm hoping for something different, I can guarantee if a pairing they didn't want was winning they would be "whining" just as much as I am. *sigh* Oh welll. I'm just ranting a bit, I do like your story quite a lot. I loved the part in the classroom with the gift basket, that wasn't very nice to do in the middle of class but still quite funny. I can't wait til you end it and we see how Naruto reacts to Sasuke. I wonder though, if Naruto knows him at all or if he's pretty much a stranger? He's never mentioned in the story, so you don't really know how/if he knows him. Hmmmm....yea I'm going to stop now I'm rambling. Ranting then rambling I'm really on a roll here:D. Anyways I'm going to quit now before I really start getting annoying
person Kalariona(again, not logged in)
schedule June 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well, I believe it's Sasuke. It could have been Neji, but I don't see him as the type who could embarass Naruto in front of class like that. It seems like a Sasuke esk thing to do. Also, the obsession. I see Neji being slightly obsessed, but not to this point. Sasuke.

I hope it is. I do simply love Sasuke/Naruto.

Please!!!!

Rie
xx
person Shinigami24
schedule June 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*LOL* That lets Gaara off the hook! i'll go with my guess either Sasuke or Neji! Kiba's not the type to be scared of anyone, especially a friend. So Shikamaru's defintely off the list! I prefer Sasuke! Since I cannot see Neji embarrassing Naruto in public...Sasuke on the other hand...He IS defintely possessive, and he can be scary at times...And I have read another stories, in one of them Sasuke planted hickeys on Naruto, to show 'MINE' hands off, and there was a mention of a collar that had the words-'Sasuke's pet' on it...SO, yes I would say Sasuke is the type that isn't afraid to announce his feelings in public. But I have to admit- delivering lube in a basket is pushing it a bit too far!
person Reemu-Chan (not signed in)
schedule June 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh wow. my speech is as fluent as Narutos' during sex. I can't even describe those passed to chaps. I already made my vote. Can't wait for the next chapter. The chocolate was so hot. I knew something bad was going to happen to Kiba when he slapped Naruto on the thigh. XD Keep up the great work. And awesome smut ^^ you wrote it so deliciously. That last one though was violent to the core ^^ There is no doubt in my mind who it is.

Ria
person ZeldaFitz
schedule June 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Loving it so far. Please make it Neji. Sexy!
person Aly
schedule June 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well, I guess that leaves Sasuke or Neji since they are the ones with black hair.. Though I think Neji should give it a try because there isn't that many Neji/Naruto pairings. Most of them consist of Sasuke/Naruto pairings. And I know that both can be possessive, except Sasuke can be really possessive but you never know, Neji can be really possessive too. Though there is the case of Shika and Itachi but both are like %10 chance that they are the stalker. But if I had to vote for it, IT WOULD BE NEJI!!!!!!!!!!!! That's what I vote for. Can't wait for the next chapter.


Ang Avalonis :) smiley
person Shosuro
schedule June 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
That was goooooooooddddddd!!!!!!
I want more.... please give us more.....!!!!!
person macy
schedule June 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i want to say sasuke, since i'm a sasunaru fanatic. but it could also be Neji, or quite possibly Itachi...that would be pretty hot too. All this guessing is making me confused though! my imagination's confused with all the possible images i could have while reading this fic, LOL>