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When they find out what he's writing, they'll either kill him or buy the first copy of the book. lol. More!
*much love*

*squuuuuuuuuueeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeellllllllllllllllll* That was soooo kawai!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ^_^ keep writing onigaisimasu!!!!!!!!!!! ^-^ I greatly enjoyed this.....

Yay you updated! ZOMG tye ending! *dies from lack of breath due to laughing so much* Jiraiya's so funny at times XD

I love this fic i really REALLY hope you update soon! ^^

Liah xx

A new chapter, YAY!!!! I'm so happy to see a nice ItaNaru story, I said it before but they're so rare. Especially one that's also an mpreg. For the longest time the only mpregs I saw in Naruto were all SasuNaru. So I'm happy. I liked this new chapter. Especially the part at the beginning with Itachi discussing genius in connection with himself and his clan. I liked definitely. Though I have to say the whole thing makes me wonder if Sasuke will get any better once he finds out that Itachi didn't kill the clan. It would be interesting to see both Itachi and a new and improved Sasuke vying for Naruto's affections, with Itachi slaughtering him in the competiton. Oh well, moving on I noticed two spelling mistakes. Jaraiya should by Jiraiya and Inuzaka should be Inuzuka. That's all, I can't wait until your next update and until Itachi and Naruto "meet".

i love the unsencored(can't spell) version of Itachi's thoughts!!! That was so hot!!!!

Sweet! This chapter was totally kawaii and I thank you for it. Anyway, keep up the good work and update soon. Ja.

Wow, this was really good! And funny! I loved Jiraiya's idea of Icha Icha Paradise! I also love the way you portrayed Itachi, and his past. It was different, and I liked it much! And I also like Kyuubi's personallity in this story. I look forward to more updates!! And smut! hehehe

Why the hell isn't there more?

Also, there are parts that are kinda clunky and feel off and muddled and rushed, but otherwise good.

This story is effin' awesome! I love that you used the ItaNaru pairing and that you also used Mpreg (two of my favorite things) Continue with this, it's awesome and I cant' wait to read more.

Omg! This sounds extremely good. I love you kyuubi-san. She is just too funny. The comment about lee nearly made me wet my pants. I can't wait to read more. Always happy to see ItaNaru on the site.