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aww. Gaara can't have Naruto. lol. Update soon!

*gives a patronizing grin to the hostage Naruto next to author* Does he not like being with you while you answer fan reviews? *makes tutting noise* You really should get him laid soon, then... Maybe he'll appreciate your writing more^^lol



*glomps* Oh im so happy the third chapter is out! I was waiting and waiting.... it took FOREVER!!! *cries* (not really... maybe a day? ^^lol)


I REALLY liked the lemon! Kyuubi just cracks me up with his sarcasm... ^^ I really like how you're portraying him...

I kinda feel bad that Gaara's siblings dont have a clue whats goin on.. And I'm surprised Kiba didnt smell the ..err /lingering/ scents of sex coming from Gaara when he had returned! ^^lol

I wonder if the scents could've given him a hard on? ^^lol

And listening in on Sasuke's thoughts about HIS Naruto are fun!

I can understand completely that they weren't able to have much dialogue, and can't wait to see more! ^^

I am dying to see when Sasuke and his bro meet again! The suspense is killing me!!!!!

And am I right when I say its Sakura whose the spy? *wants to kill the bubblegun head now..*

It was another great chapter, and I understand what you mean about authors stories not flowing right, when there are things that don't go and come outta no where.... ^^ It drives a reader bonkers! ^^lol

I can't wait to read what you have for me next!!!

so cool!!!naruto's a hanyou!!!!sooooo cute!!!!but PLEASE don't make it a naruto/sasuke/kiba fic. just naruto and sasuke.PLEASE!!!

HAHA XD Zomg poor Gaara *snickers* Ah that was amusing ^^

I have a feeling i know who the person who's against Naruto is too... thouhg I'm not gonna say incase i get it wrong T_T;;

I cant wait to read more ^^ This is really interesting =P ^^

I love it i have no words to discrib how much. Pleace print more chapters soon i'm deing to know what hapens on the next chapter.

well, threesome works well. i think you should go for a full threesome. if you want a tip, you should have at start only kiba/naru and sasu/naru with naru not certain about who to choose, and maybe if you add a part where naruto is not there for a while (dunno, he got kidnapped, or leaves for some time/days/weeks) you could develop the other two fighting between them for him and then fallling for each other as well. so a full threesome. :P

just an idea.

great chapter, but i just... um, evaded the lemon part. i don't read lemons with charas that have no naruto in the count, or shikamaru or itachi. so XDDXD but the chapter was still great, and really funny. poor shukaku, he should get laid more... and mate gaara with someone nice. XD

I hope you will keep up the good work and give a good beating at the fucking bitch spy, though, I worship itachi... *sighs*

Ceph

Full out threesome, I have never seen that. I love Sasu/Naru and I want to see more Kiba/Naru, but I must insist on a fullout threesome, I mean come on you can always write another fic to cover the other pairings, but this is too good to pass up! I have never seen Kiba/Sasu, so please let this be a good old threesome main pairing!!! You would be making my tail wag and my ears perk up! Enough begging, this is fairly well written, a lot of people approach this type of thing without the skill to see it through, I think you are capable. Well, waiting patiently for more.

I liked the new chapter, it's always nice to see Gaara. Though I have to say I'd be pretty pissed too if my demon took over and let someone screw my body, especially since I'd be the one who'd have to deal with the discomfort afterwards. I'm guessing that the one who's spying is either Sakura or Ino, but most likely Sakura because Ino is a bit of a non-entity when it comes to Naruto. I think her and Tenten (who you didn't mention btw) are the two who have the least amount of interaction with Naruto of the rookie nine plus Gai's team. So I hope sometime we'll get to see a Sakura getting her ass kicked scene, that's always snice. Can't stand her character, even with the change she's made in the manga I just can't get past the way she started. Ugh. You mentioned that you haven't decided whether or not to have an mpreg, I hope that you do. I love mpregs and I can't find any good Naruto mpregs that have actually been finished or look like they're going to be finished, they all just stop halfway. Makes me wanna cry, I hope that you do finish your story and I hope that you do decide to turn it into an mpreg. Though I have a question about that, and it might not even apply but I feel a need to ask anyways, would Naruto only be able to get pregnant when he's in heat or would it be able to happen at all times? I wasn't completely clear on that in the explanation of mating season. On the subject of who Naruto should be mated with, it seems like the consensus is for a threesome, but to make my vote more specific, I vote that if there is a threesome that it be a complete threesome, so just Sasuke popping in once in awhile. And yea, I think that's about it. I don't think I mentioned it before, so I'm going to now: I really like your story so far and I can't wait until your next update.

Kiba/Naru? umm.. SasuNaru rulz.. but its your story I'll still read it if its Kiba/Naru since its very good... poor naru-chan is always the uke... well i can see why but.. still.. anyways very good story i love it keep updating... ja!

I /looooooooovve/ it and damnitt it had better continue or
I will beg you until you do!