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for Fox Tails

by Auroawinter

person Mrs Heero Yuy
schedule June 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay Mpreg!! I have always liked yaoi pairings best, but I also feel the need to keep the bloodlines from dieing out. I tend to think of how I would feel if put into a position like Sasuke; having to keep up his bloodline. It is upsetting when someone's bloodline isn't passed on, even when in the story Sasuke is fine with it. This leaves Mpreg as the only option, so I'm glad you put that in the story. Please keep up the great work! I can't wait to read the next chapter.
person epppy
schedule June 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like your story alot!!!!!
its very entertaining had me l;aughing alot at
some moments!!! Anyways i would like to see a threesome pairi g
it woul;d be more intresting but its up 2 u!!! Can't
wait 4 da next update!!! till then!!!
person Jenn
schedule June 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like the threesome idea, i don't see it often and i think it would be great with your story line.
person novi-san
schedule June 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
MORE MORE MORE ^^

and KIBA/NARU ALL THE WAY ^_~

you are officially one of my favorite authors right now XD
person Liah
schedule June 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I lvoe this fic so far ^^ It's so different from others i read, i really hope you keep this going ^^

shame about Sakura and Ino though >_>: *bitch slaps them* Then again it's not that suprising ^^;;

Can't wait for the next chapter ^^

Liah xx
person akume
schedule June 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This was a great chapter, but you seem to have left out Tenten when Naruto explained his perdicament. Come to think of it, she probably would have reacted the same as Sakura and Ino. They can be so closed minded. Anyway, thanks again and do update as soon as possible. Ja.
person Kelsee
schedule June 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Not to be picky, but the fox is literally volpine, fox-like, not canine, dog-like. This story is adorable! I cannot wait for it to continue! What are the pairings?
person SilentInquisition
schedule June 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Uh oh. Kiba's gonna be affected by the heat isn't he? lol. Wouldn't that be fun. Anyway, update soon, and keep up the good work.
person Anon
schedule June 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is fun! I vote for the threesome. :)
person xBunni
schedule June 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yakitori!! Oishii desu~ ^^ Lol, hard thing working part time in a japanese restuarant, must learn to put up an immune system so I don't drool whilst I'm waitressing~ ^^;; Soredewa~ I really enjoyed this chapter!! ^^ I hope the next chapter will be out soon though, I really want to see the plot moving faster into the action na no~ ^^ Demo, I'm really enjoying the fic so take your time, ne~? ^^ Ja, gambatte desu!!