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person Shibayaha
schedule August 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ahaha!! Funny ending!! Geez give poor Naru-chan mental scars for the rest of his life, why donncha? Just kidding! ^^#
person ERtz Nalcanis
schedule June 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMFG!!! i am seriouslly beginning jto want to base a religion around you and your beautiful works!! i have not read something this good in a LONG time. and i am sure your works will help me improve!! please never stop giveing forth this erotic beauty!!
person Sato-kun
schedule June 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow.. just wow.. That was really hawt D: Seriously. I'd like to see more stuff with Sasuke on the bottom, and not just with his brother! Nyahahaha! <33
person themirror
schedule June 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, i really really liked it ^_^ It's so cute ^_^
person pill-popper
schedule June 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was HOTT! Yes, with two T's.
person blisblop
schedule June 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very nice!Esp.Sasuke's reactions just before he came.Howls.Yo0u gettin Good girl/boy friend.Yes,yes.End was a hoot.
person losthimagain
schedule June 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE IT! It's cute, sexy and let's not forget on crack! XD Thank you!
schedule June 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
haha this was great, i loved every bit of it, and the sex was HOT.. and thx for puttin up the link to the pic that inspired it! but lol, what i'm taking away with me is "duck butt hairdo" lmaolmaolmao!! as soon as i read that, i couldn't stop laughing for at least 5 minutes straight and IM'd my girl Houseki to send tons of rolling smilies her way XD here's the convo that ensued:

IDK if you've ever used YIM, or if the codes for the smilies are the same all over, so here's a lil key: =)) is a rolling smilie (as in ROFL) :)) is a laughing smilie (as in LOL) and ;)) is a giggling smilie (with its hand over its mouth cutely) ..oh yeah, and "inne" is our slang for "indeed" ..anyway, here's the convo:

ladygizarme: lmao cinnamon apple buns.. great now i'm cake-snacky :))
Houseki: lmao
Houseki: dood my favorite line is just after that...
ladygizarme: lmaooooooooo the duck butt hair do
ladygizarme: =)) =))
ladygizarme: i.. can't seem.. to read past that
ladygizarme: *tears*
Houseki: hehe hai hai that is definitely the best line :p
Houseki: EVER
Houseki: to describe his hair
Houseki: ;))
ladygizarme: inne!! =)) =)) =))
ladygizarme: lmao i've never seen it used before, but damn.. lmao duck butt hairdo.. that is so it =))
ladygizarme: idk if i'll ever be able to look at his hair the same again :))
Houseki: lmao inne dood....i'll be imagining a duck sittin on his head every time now
ladygizarme: lmaooooo
ladygizarme: i have this image of daffy in a looney toon where he's in a pond w/other ducks and it's hunting season *crack*
ladygizarme: then ninja-sasuke comes up out of the water underneath the "decoy daffy" =))
Houseki: rofl!!
Houseki: soooooooo wrong!! =))

ahhh anyway, it was so of the good, thanks for that :p great fic besides that as well ^__~

~ lg
person dagget
schedule June 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was kinky and funny. I thoroughly enjoyed it. Two thumbs up...Sasuke's ass! lol
person sapphirexkat2
schedule June 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow wow wow!

I always knew Naruto was the ultimate seme. He's such a beast in bed ^_~

as for Sasuke, we all know he's a slut who's just begging for it.

Great job with this story!