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October 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
really good story!
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October 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Alright, I have to say that throughout the entire fic I was always halfway between loving it and hating it. Yes I know, a strange paradox, but let me explain. I was first pulled to your story because I found the thought of an evil Naruto intriguing. I was curious how you would portray an evil Naruto, and a not so evil Sasuke. You did an amazing job of establishing your characters, and then keeping them in character. You also wrote a believable story meaning that you did not have Naruto immediately want to go back to Konoha after meeting up with Sasuke again. Nor did you have Naruto become the old Naruto (happy go-lucky Naruto) as soon as he was away from Otagakure.
However, I also always partly hated your fic because it makes all too much sense that after a while, all the ill treatment Naruto got from Konoha would cause him to "snap" in a sense. It also made me really hate Konoha for what they did to Naruto, and how they were responsible for taking the light out of Naruto. So you see, the fact that I partly hated your fic is not in fact an insult, but very high praise of your writing skills. Your story was so well written and believable that you were able to elicit such a strong response from me. A sign of a truly great writer is one that is able to create characters that readers become so attached to, that they begin to care deeply for the characters and what happens to them. Now that I have explained myself I hope that you understand that in no way am I criticizing “Path to Perdition” or you as a writer, quite the opposite actually. I do not know if you plan to continue this story. If you do, than I will certainly read the next chapter. If you feel that this is a good place to stop though, I would agree with that decision as well. Regardless, my best wishes for you and your writing.
Dryad1789@hotmail.com
However, I also always partly hated your fic because it makes all too much sense that after a while, all the ill treatment Naruto got from Konoha would cause him to "snap" in a sense. It also made me really hate Konoha for what they did to Naruto, and how they were responsible for taking the light out of Naruto. So you see, the fact that I partly hated your fic is not in fact an insult, but very high praise of your writing skills. Your story was so well written and believable that you were able to elicit such a strong response from me. A sign of a truly great writer is one that is able to create characters that readers become so attached to, that they begin to care deeply for the characters and what happens to them. Now that I have explained myself I hope that you understand that in no way am I criticizing “Path to Perdition” or you as a writer, quite the opposite actually. I do not know if you plan to continue this story. If you do, than I will certainly read the next chapter. If you feel that this is a good place to stop though, I would agree with that decision as well. Regardless, my best wishes for you and your writing.
Dryad1789@hotmail.com
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October 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awesome Awesome awsome. I liked this story alot and i'm glad that Naruto is beginning to see the light once again. Why does he always suffer so much! Also, having Gaara and good ol Shika to give him sound advice was a great peice. I hope Sasuke helps Naruto believe in himself again and maybe he and Neji can come to forgive each other. Update soon!
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October 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice wrap, will Naruto reach his ultimate goal or will his desire for vengance curtail it? Are we actually seeing their marriage in a future chap? Update soon please!
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July 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I don't care how long it's going to take you to update your story, but I really hope that you will update it as soon as possible, becauase I want to read more of the story!
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July 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
NNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!! i dnt want it to end!!*runs to corner and pouts* i cant wait to read more! i know college has to be tough but i hope u will find time to continue writing as postin chapters here-i luv ur story so much
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June 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love how your story is going. There is so much sexual tension! Can you please update soon! I want to know if Naruto will ever become good again!!
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June 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I love the developing relationship between the two! Naruto's so reluctant to let Sasuke in, but Sasuke's just so damn persistant! Gah, it's great. Update soon!!
Cheers,
R2F
Cheers,
R2F
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June 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
whoa!!! love this fanfic......Naruto.... I love him being evil! ........ I can't wait for the next chapter hope u update soon!!!!
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June 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
God, I really love this fanfic ^_^ I can't wait to the next chapter...
You really writes beautiful ^_^
You really writes beautiful ^_^