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for Path to Perdition (complete)

by Midnightstorm

person Liah
schedule June 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ZOMG! YaY XD Great chapter ^^ I'm glad that Naruto's starting to come back now ^^

I can't wait for the next bit, i mean will Jassin find out etc? XD ^^

Liah xx
person Hellagoddess
schedule June 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YAY! An update! Loved this chapter...love the whole story in fact! It's so rare to see a well done evil-naruto. But fingers crossed that he'll come right again and fall madly for Sasuke and they'll have some hot man sex with lots of kissing and declared affection...on Orochimaru's dead corpse...lmao j/k!

Keep going! I DO really wanna see how this one turns out!

Hella ^ ^ V
person blisblop
schedule June 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Interesting?Yes!Like this...I love Orochimaru,his compultion is after all is a part of the human condition fear of the biggest(unless you are religious) unknown..I never did understand all the Jackson refferences,those kids are tools obviously,not lovers/toys.It must be an american thing.Too much propiganda people.Jeez.Glad you wrote it with him but the tounge wasn't used.Your formatting is messed up bad .
person ydjessy
schedule June 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is turning out to be a great story. I can't wait for the next update, to bad I'm going out of town where there's like no computers.
Anyhow I enjoy reading this, except it's hard reading it with all those symbols in the middle of words. Hope you can get that fixed, but if
you can't I'll deal.
Update soon!!
person Kattvinge
schedule June 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You might want to check your settings/encodings or something because all I get is strange typos insted of '
For an example: Uchiha's are coming out like this: Uchiha’s - pain in the ass to read. I've read parts of this story over at ff.net so I know it's a good story. Not often you come across evil Naruto. So I hope I get to read it here too... but as it looks now - I will not... so take another look will ya, and see if you can get it fixed.
person ItachiLovers
schedule June 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I Love This Fic!!! Really, I Love it!!! I Love Evil Naru!! I Love Sasu-Uke!! Hwahahaha~~!!! Great Job, guyz!!
Please Update Quickly!!! I can't wait!!!
Hey, You're like the one of SasuNaru's Author on www.fanfiction.net. Is that you? Who always said that you own Itachi? [huwee,, no!!! Itachi's mine~~!!! XD]
Huhu...Whatever...
I can't wait for next chapter!!!
See ya!!!
person Liah
schedule June 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay ^^ you updated XD though you have a problem with the ' in it, they turn out with symbols so you might wanna edit that...

But other than that... Whoa O_O Naruto is strong now... O_O Heh I cant wait to see what happens next ^^

Liah xx
person Hellagoddess
schedule June 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay for evil naruto! This is awesome! Keep going, i want to see how it turns out!!
person ydjessy
schedule June 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice chapter, but what happened to chapter two.
person xBunni
schedule June 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oo Naru-chan was the seme!! *le gasp* *faints from seeing the narusasu-ness* Although I'm not a fan of sasunaru or anynaru actually, it was still bearable~ ^^ Demo I'm glad to see that at the end naru-chan seems more like his uke-self~ ^^