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by Rian

schedule July 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Personally I started reading this mostly for the NaruSaku interactions. If you really do intend to do some NaruIno, I would prefer that it be in a separate story, but as you're the writer, that's up to you. The smut seems to be a bit rushed, and it doesn't flow as smoothly as the rest of the story does. Looking forward to more Sakura time, as she seems to be rather scarce, and I personally think she needs more love.
person jennjennr
schedule July 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Whoo an update.. Although I am not one for too much yaoi... I do have to say I actually enjoyed reading this... it was weird but enjoyable... Hmm I can't wait for more Sakunarusasu action... *sigh* I just love them as a threesome... they're so good together. Well once again thank you for the much anticipated update and please do so again soon.
person mu1488
schedule July 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
you get an A from me ;D
one of teh best stories i've read so far, write on!
person VII
schedule July 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YAY THREESOMES!!! Are u going to add more chapters??

VII
person IloveYou
schedule July 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ADD a Naruto/Ino scene
person SandMan56
schedule July 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Update soon, Naruto/Ino scene.
person blazer6
schedule July 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
do a chapter with Naruto and Tenten. She could be another sport scholarship girl or something.
person DemonWolf666
schedule July 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I agree add a Naruto/TenTen or Naruto/Ino scene, that would make this great story even better
person death.by.shuriken (sorry... too lazy to log in.)
schedule July 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow... that was hot.
person Mageblood
schedule July 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The end of the chapter was soo cute for Saku and Naru, i also liked the rest of the the chapter as well!!!!
So please update as soon as possible!!!!!!