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June 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I can't read this story. Scrolling back and forth hurts my eyes if you could fix it I would really apreshated it. It Would make it must easier for someone to read. The story sounds promising I just can't stand the scrolling back and forth.
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June 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is really good is there any way you can alert me when you update cause I wanna read more
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June 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*gg* the last comment of naruto was great *nearly falling on the floor*
oh i LOVE the way you've described sasuke! (did i tell you before?) - he's different from other stories (ok, he's a bastard, but when isn't he ^^) - i mean it's not often that he cares (so openly) about boobs! *grin* (most of the time he's like: i do not care!)
really great chapter! - hope to reed more soon ^^
oh i LOVE the way you've described sasuke! (did i tell you before?) - he's different from other stories (ok, he's a bastard, but when isn't he ^^) - i mean it's not often that he cares (so openly) about boobs! *grin* (most of the time he's like: i do not care!)
really great chapter! - hope to reed more soon ^^
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June 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
when are you going to update cause i wanna know whats going to happen to Sakura and what Naruto and Sasuke have planned for her so as soon as u can update cause this story is kicking some major arse. Ja Mata Naruto Lover
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June 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
please please please please update as soon as u can i wanna know whats gonna happen next and what Naruto and Sasuke are planning to do to Sakura. So please update as soon as u can cause this movie is fucking awesome and i sooooo wanna know whats gonna happen next so as soon as you can please update. Ja Mata Misawo
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June 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
please i am begging you please update this story cause i so wanna know whats going to happen next so as soon as u can please update cause this story is awesome and i am so curious as to what Naruto and Sasuke have in mind for our little Sakura so update as soon as u can. Ja Mata Lily
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June 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
really nice beginning! - and great writing style!
i like the idea of neji as a voyeur *grin* - and i like the way you've described the characters! (and it made me smile at the part with "are they or are they not" - because sometimes you can't really tell!)
also the way you described sakura was great! - i like it that she "likes" sasuke (and wants to get to know him?!) but isn't all that "fangirlish"!
will you tell us why naruto and sasuke choose sakura? (did both choose or just one of them?)
i like the idea of neji as a voyeur *grin* - and i like the way you've described the characters! (and it made me smile at the part with "are they or are they not" - because sometimes you can't really tell!)
also the way you described sakura was great! - i like it that she "likes" sasuke (and wants to get to know him?!) but isn't all that "fangirlish"!
will you tell us why naruto and sasuke choose sakura? (did both choose or just one of them?)
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June 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Looking forward to the update, this is off to a good start.
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June 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It's really good, update soon! ^^
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June 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
seems like a great start to me. Keep up the good work and update soon.