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November 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story is amazing, period. No matter how many times I read it (chapter 8, in particular) I think it's a masterpice in threesome fics. You are an awesome writer and I'm so sad of not getting any signs of life from you...
Please, can you let me know if you are planning to update or if you have given up on it? (at least end my agony and suffering, please T.T I've tried so many times to contact you without a result) And in case of bad news -since you have my e-mail- could you be so kind as o tell me how you had in mind to finish it? I don't need much, even a line is good as long as I can learn the ending. Being left at half fic is horrible, when the fic is so beautiful.
Thank you very much in advance. I really hope you update someday.
~venia
Please, can you let me know if you are planning to update or if you have given up on it? (at least end my agony and suffering, please T.T I've tried so many times to contact you without a result) And in case of bad news -since you have my e-mail- could you be so kind as o tell me how you had in mind to finish it? I don't need much, even a line is good as long as I can learn the ending. Being left at half fic is horrible, when the fic is so beautiful.
Thank you very much in advance. I really hope you update someday.
~venia
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September 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awwww damn, I've come back after so long and you still haven't updated ;__; This was, no, still IS my favourite AU threesome, so please, please, give us a sign that you're going to continue it!! I wholeheartedly adore it, you can't stop it now...
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June 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please please please update this story. This is probably one of the best FF's on here other than NaruSakuSasu one shots everywhere. But they're no where near yours. So please please please update this. You havent updateed this since last year and that kinda scares me. Please update
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February 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
uuuuum, I don't usually review here but your story is amazing. Honestly I could ramble on and on about what makes it good, but I'm sure you've heard it before ^^ Looking forward to seeing how this pans out!
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January 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story is so subverse - so interesting. It gets at their personalities in such interesting ways. I can't wait to see what happens and I have no idea what will. Thought it was a good chapter despite your worries about it.
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December 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
H-O-T
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December 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story gives me the chills. There is nothing I like more than dark fiction, and this is my favorite triangle of all fandoms. I cannot tell you how thrilled I was when you updated! I think that your latest chapter does your story justice. I still feel terrible for Sasuke. I love SasuNaruSasu but at the same time I love NaruSaku. Still, in the end if things fall apart for these three, I hope that Naruto chooses Sasuke. That said, I'm rooting for you too, Sakura-chan! Thank you very very much for updating.
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December 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I forgot to say that I liked very much the ups and downs in the battle control(not only a physical control, but in confidence too)^^ and also that Sakura replied with logic when Sasuke expected her to get discouraged. *___* I can't wait to see what will happen with Naruto! This story is fantastic!
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December 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
it's so good, the lemons and the way you describe the characters! seriously i can feel the pain that both sasuke and naruto feel and it's like sakura's the only one who really sees anything clearly. it will be a real threesome right?? -with everyone loving everyone in the end? i hope so team7 belong together!
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December 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
O___O I'm seriously impressed. Most of the fics that stop being updated for a long period, are not so good when they come back. People return to post a short chapter or get lazy and don't write again (leaving things incomplete).
But despite the time it took, YOUR story is getting better and better with every chapter, damn it! How do you do this? Instead of a lower-quality-chapter that I expected, you managed to raise the interest to hights, while keeping a balance between the smut and the emotional part (especially Sasuke's frustration/jealousy). This was awesome! I could feel every thing being said, the emotions could be truly felt. And also, the characters behaved with some consistency, like real people, instead of coming up with totally random, non-credible ways of acting. What I'm trying to say is... they are IC (as far as your interpretation is concerned, at least XD not IC to the manga)
I like your Sakura ^^(I'm thankful that you treat her relatively nicely, because >.> SOME people that write team7 Threesomes are so obvious in their hate for her, that it ends up being ridiculous and I wonder why they include a character they don't like since they are going to address people who like her anyway).I'm not talking about Sasuke's cruel thoughts about her, because simply it's the view he has of her in the story and it's normal. His voice is different from the author's though, which means you did a very good work ;D (this is something I always mess up when I write).
I adore Naruto in his stubborn love and that cold bastard Sasuke too (his cruelty here reminds me of PIERO's Sasuke), who admitted to himself Sakura is his RIVAL(omg! XDDDDD yay) Their relationships are so different yet so fascinating.
I can't wait to read what will happen next (oh and, right now this story is one of my favourites! love it!!!!!!)I will be waiting for an update, I hope it's soon ^^
But despite the time it took, YOUR story is getting better and better with every chapter, damn it! How do you do this? Instead of a lower-quality-chapter that I expected, you managed to raise the interest to hights, while keeping a balance between the smut and the emotional part (especially Sasuke's frustration/jealousy). This was awesome! I could feel every thing being said, the emotions could be truly felt. And also, the characters behaved with some consistency, like real people, instead of coming up with totally random, non-credible ways of acting. What I'm trying to say is... they are IC (as far as your interpretation is concerned, at least XD not IC to the manga)
I like your Sakura ^^(I'm thankful that you treat her relatively nicely, because >.> SOME people that write team7 Threesomes are so obvious in their hate for her, that it ends up being ridiculous and I wonder why they include a character they don't like since they are going to address people who like her anyway).I'm not talking about Sasuke's cruel thoughts about her, because simply it's the view he has of her in the story and it's normal. His voice is different from the author's though, which means you did a very good work ;D (this is something I always mess up when I write).
I adore Naruto in his stubborn love and that cold bastard Sasuke too (his cruelty here reminds me of PIERO's Sasuke), who admitted to himself Sakura is his RIVAL(omg! XDDDDD yay) Their relationships are so different yet so fascinating.
I can't wait to read what will happen next (oh and, right now this story is one of my favourites! love it!!!!!!)I will be waiting for an update, I hope it's soon ^^