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December 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
okay. i just read this all in one sitting.
1: HOT!
2: saskuto is my fav 3-way, EVER.
3: HOT!!
4: i love the jelousy thing. it makes it even hotter.
5: HOT!!!
great job overall. i've noticed a few small errors, but nothing much. i look forward to more!!~
1: HOT!
2: saskuto is my fav 3-way, EVER.
3: HOT!!
4: i love the jelousy thing. it makes it even hotter.
5: HOT!!!
great job overall. i've noticed a few small errors, but nothing much. i look forward to more!!~
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December 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOOO!! I'm a die hard NAruSasu fan and reading Naruto leaving Sasuke is vey..sad!
I dunno. .I prefer it if the ending were NaruSasu and they are beneficial friends with Sakura..but it's your story. =^.^=
I dunno. .I prefer it if the ending were NaruSasu and they are beneficial friends with Sakura..but it's your story. =^.^=
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December 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am so happy that you finally updated this story! I have been waiting for it wanting to know what would happen. I hope you can update soon!
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December 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sasuke is such a bastard. Oh well, we love bastards don't we? I can't wait to read more.
Rox
Rox
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December 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
man, I thought this one was a lost cause, well Im glad you finally updated. Keep up the good work and update soon.
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December 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this is very good. thanks for writing
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September 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ahhh hey! you can't leave it like that! you just have to update!! it was a great story...;__;
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August 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*spits out juice from the juice box i'm currently drinking* oh my.. *looks at my juice box* good chapter. wow. i really like how you depicted Sasuke and Naruto. I really do. It wasn't the norm, but i liked it anyways. good work. :)
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April 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I started reading this story when you started posting it here, but lost it for a while. Lucky me that I refound it! Wow! Hot smex and incredible characterisations! You are doing an incredible job of building a new world for our favorite characters while still maintaining those parts of their personalities true. I am thoroughly impressed. I make me smile and giggle with/at the interactions and want to cry for the same characters in the same chapter. And with all your character development you still keep the smut coming and hot. A truly impressive job. I am too in awe to think of anything else to add.
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January 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That...was a lot more depressing than anything i was expecting. I had this horrible feeling of loss and i wanted to cry for both sasuke and Naruto. i don't know that i can allow myself to feel bad for sasuke because frankly he's been a huge bastard, but i can't help but feel like there is more going on with both of the boys--and that Sasuke is doing what he's doing because he's scared of losing his only friend.
I, for one, think that Naruto deserves his fantasy (that part about naruto/sasuke/sakura) to come true--I mean he's a nice guy! but how to fix the rift sasuke (that idiot bastard) has created? Maybe Sakura can be the peace maker? No, that might backfire seeing as she's the problem as far as sasuke is concerned. I can't imagine that Naruto won't have doubts and regrets about what he did--especially if sasuke misses school or shows up limping or something?
Oh! And there's always Neji! Maybe he can hit Sasuke upside the head and make the bastard feel a bit contrite. I imagine the Sasuke that was standing at the top of the stairs at the end of this chapter would be willing to drop his ice prince facade in order to bring naruto back and to get the pain in his chest to go away.
You've hinted a little at backstories here and there. is there going to be more?
I remember reading this when you first posted it and thinking, "nice smut, but no plot." I am pleasantly surprised to have run across it again with so many new chapters and a burgeoning, *kickass* plot (of which smut plays an important, not pointless, factor XD). Plus it's my favorite threesome. ^_^
I want an update!! I want an update!! I want an update!!
Please?
I, for one, think that Naruto deserves his fantasy (that part about naruto/sasuke/sakura) to come true--I mean he's a nice guy! but how to fix the rift sasuke (that idiot bastard) has created? Maybe Sakura can be the peace maker? No, that might backfire seeing as she's the problem as far as sasuke is concerned. I can't imagine that Naruto won't have doubts and regrets about what he did--especially if sasuke misses school or shows up limping or something?
Oh! And there's always Neji! Maybe he can hit Sasuke upside the head and make the bastard feel a bit contrite. I imagine the Sasuke that was standing at the top of the stairs at the end of this chapter would be willing to drop his ice prince facade in order to bring naruto back and to get the pain in his chest to go away.
You've hinted a little at backstories here and there. is there going to be more?
I remember reading this when you first posted it and thinking, "nice smut, but no plot." I am pleasantly surprised to have run across it again with so many new chapters and a burgeoning, *kickass* plot (of which smut plays an important, not pointless, factor XD). Plus it's my favorite threesome. ^_^
I want an update!! I want an update!! I want an update!!
Please?