rate_review Reviews

I love the story!! I've read all 7 chapters and can't wait for the next one!

That was hot. =O
I never read Sasu/Naru, but this was good.
You have a nice story going.
I'm looking forward to more.
Update soon, please.

Ahhhh this needs an update! I love this fic!

Wow, I forgot about this fic for so long and now it's suddenly this long and great story! Good job and I hope to see another update soon.

so awesome. this story is amazing. i love it. the feelings and the action. wow. super. uptade soon, k? :)

I'll admit this is the only AFF.net chapter story I've ever bothered to keep reading.
I love the way you set this up.
And you're absolutely a brilliant writer.

I`m impressed. This story is obviously sexy as all hell--you write great lemons. But I like how you`re writing Sasuke too. He`s being such an utter bastard, and that`s just how bullies really are--they want to be loved so badly that they do exactly the wrong thing and wind up cutting themselves off from the very thing they need. Sasuke moving to darker and nastier methods to get love is just so...human. At this point I`m hoping Naruto and Sakura are going to cut him off, because he`s just too lost to really become a part of the relationship. But given how well you`ve structured this, I don`t think I`ll be at all surprised if you turn the story around and wind up reedeming him after all!

well even though I just considered it a lemon-lemon-plus fanfic at the beginning, now I also see it has a nice plot structure. I liked that naruto made it clear since the beginning that he is aiming for smth more permanent with sakura other than sex. sasuke also, i was surpised to see he is actually...gealous!he made naruto angry just for this instead of telling him..XD so there ARE some feelings here...and that upgraded your fic to my eyes. Of course lemon isn't bothering at all(*__*drool...)it's just that feelings add more to it. i look forwrd to your updates!keep up the good work, i wonder how their relationship is going to evolve

Hey, I'm glad you updated. And even though I don't really like the yaoi stuff, I'll still say that it was good. Anyway, please update soon! I can't wait! Thanxs! :) :p ;)

God sasuke is such an ass. I still believe that you could fit in a little naruto tenten. Like before sakura goes to the game she finds out from ino that she was with Naruto. Sakura gets pissed and steps all over Narutos heart during the game. Tenten, star of the girls team and also broke up recently sees this and symphasizes with him. they talk and it involves into a friends with benefits thing. you gave sasuke allthese girls naruto deserves one for a chapter or two dammit. Update soon your fic rules.